Um, okay, lest evil spells haunt me, I shall offer up my humble opinion of this story.
Utterly fantastic. Well written, very believable, and seemingly in character. It works.
I shall tip my hat to you!
Sinestra

Oh no you din't bring in the "Day of Judgement." Your story's actually pretty good.

u said justing waiting. wahahaha!

Great chapter... quickly update the next.

i want casserole!

okaym this is scary...

Yadda, yadda, onto the point. Keep up the great work! Fabulous!

Good story but the charecters are not really real.

A revised edition! This is even better! Keep it up!

that was very nice change to see it from Peter's POV. everyone normally just sidecasts him and never gives the character a chance to redeem himself by showing a sympathetic side to his betrayel. very nicely written ^^