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| Danica V 2007-11-06 ch 9,  | abuseThis plotline is really good, and as for there not being romance, i don't think it matters. Some stories don't need that, and i think this one can work without it. Also, you have written it so eloquently. |
| princessako 2007-03-30 ch 23, | abusewow! what a great story! very good! i like it! |
| coconut-dreamer 2007-03-25 ch 23, | abuseYay, it's letting me review again! The last few chapters were FANTASTIC! This is THE best CSI fanfi I've read. Great Job. Deffinately one of my favourites. |
| coconut-dreamer 2007-03-24 ch 18, | abuseNot another cliffe! :) nah really, i love them. Poor Greg! |
| coconut-dreamer 2007-03-23 ch 14, | abuseNot again! Poor Greg! He was right to trust his instinct. Hope he's ok. |
| coconut-dreamer 2007-03-23 ch 11, | abuseOh, evil cliffe. Very intense. |
| kokomocalifornia 2007-03-21 ch 23, | abusei cant believe its over! sob. great stuff. i am def keen for another story if you are! (wink! wink!) |
| shanniegirl 2007-03-20 ch 23, | abuseWow, that was a great story! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. I find it hard to believe that this is your first fic, it so well written! I especially liked the red herrings, I thought Adrienne was involved for a long time! Great characterization, they all seemed like themselves which can be hard to pull off. I hope you continue to write, especially if its more Greg angst ;). Please write a sequel! |
| sUnKiSsT 2007-03-20 ch 23, | abuseexcellent work! i cant wait for your next CSI fic! |
| StarryFaith 2007-03-20 ch 23, | abuseOMG IT IS OVER! ...ok im sad. And you updated at an amazing speed, which is really ... amazing. The only thing that went kinda fast for me is the end. Everything led up to it, and then they found him super quickly and the end. Wonderful writer though. I also like how there weren't really any intercharacter romances, unlike so many others. You better write more CSI fics! |
| BekiC 2007-03-20 ch 23, | abuseA great end to a great fic. Warrick found him, I'm happy! And you know you will write a sequel. Anyone who can churn out a story this good in just over two weeks is bound to come up with a brilliant idea for a sequel. |
| wildbats 2007-03-20 ch 23, | abuse*clap* Yeah nice ending. Poor Greggo though. :( |
| GregsLabrat 2007-03-20 ch 23, | abuseI hope you write a sequel, cuz I would love to read one! Great story...but why didn't they find Micheal? Now you definitely have to write a sequel and when you do, you'll have a reader to it! :p Great job! |
| geek'd 2007-03-20 ch 23, | abuseHA!! i knew it was emily!! i knew it! i'm SO glad greg's OK. if he died...*shudders* i don't think i would be able to stand it. can't wait for the sequel comes out, i'll be waiting. peace, Rylie |
| ProdigiousDiscourse 2007-03-20 ch 23, | abusegreat its over that makes me happy, you like pulled off four chapters thats awesome! |