out of curiousity, were the names you used to side characters based off of people you actually know? i was just wondering, because i know about 90 percent of the people you mentioned, haha. first and last names and all. weird. :)

i do not appreciate you reference to ADD i don't care if you didn't mean it but its hard enough to live with it without being insulted while doing something i enjoy
so in the future please use a less insulting analogy

This plotline is really good, and as for there not being romance, i don't think it matters. Some stories don't need that, and i think this one can work without it. Also, you have written it so eloquently.

wow! what a great story! very good! i like it!

Yay, it's letting me review again! The last few chapters were FANTASTIC! This is THE best CSI fanfi I've read. Great Job. Deffinately one of my favourites.

Not another cliffe! :) nah really, i love them. Poor Greg!

Not again! Poor Greg! He was right to trust his instinct. Hope he's ok.

Oh, evil cliffe. Very intense.

i cant believe its over! sob. great stuff. i am def keen for another story if you are! (wink! wink!)

Wow, that was a great story! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. I find it hard to believe that this is your first fic, it so well written! I especially liked the red herrings, I thought Adrienne was involved for a long time! Great characterization, they all seemed like themselves which can be hard to pull off. I hope you continue to write, especially if its more Greg angst ;). Please write a sequel!

excellent work! i cant wait for your next CSI fic!

OMG IT IS OVER! ...ok im sad. And you updated at an amazing speed, which is really ... amazing. The only thing that went kinda fast for me is the end. Everything led up to it, and then they found him super quickly and the end. Wonderful writer though. I also like how there weren't really any intercharacter romances, unlike so many others. You better write more CSI fics!

A great end to a great fic. Warrick found him, I'm happy! And you know you will write a sequel. Anyone who can churn out a story this good in just over two weeks is bound to come up with a brilliant idea for a sequel.

*clap* Yeah nice ending. Poor Greggo though. :(

I hope you write a sequel, cuz I would love to read one! Great story...but why didn't they find Micheal? Now you definitely have to write a sequel and when you do, you'll have a reader to it! :p Great job!