UUWWAAHH!! THAT MADE ME SO SAD! it was sweet T.T very sad

maybe it's coz i'm actually looking for things that'll make me cry that i am crying. I dunno...i just feel oddly touched. i love it.

I just had to review this story... you made me cry. The writing was a little rough but I loved it anyway... and normally I can't stand death fics but I liked this one. Bravo!

that was such a sad story! but it was...idk...awesome =] i liked it.

That is way to sad. Man to have to go and never say goodbye to Yuki. Chilling

that was a sweet story i like it alot you should write more like it

omg that is so sad i want to cry.

Very Cute!! It made me cry though!

~Jessie

DAMN YOU! that's SO sad!

“great short fic. just wish there was an epilogue for this. it was really good. ttyl. l8r”

The person above me is no doubt as retarded as you. It wasn’t great. Simple as. The vast amount of verb confusions, not to mention the rather over-used and dry “plot”, was staggering. Shuichi told Yuki so much in his letters (because, really, if I were Shuichi, I’d write to Yuki about the weather, really) that he seemingly forgot to mention his rather dire heart condition.

Do us all a favour and remove this sorry waste of space from the internet would you. If you’re a nice person, you really wouldn’t want people to have the misfortune of stumbling across this, do you?

I don’t say this often, but just quit writing. You’re ** at it. The fanfiction world does not need another preppy idiot writing pure shite. This is the best advice I can possibly give you. Please, just take it and go.

Oh, that was so sad and beautiful. I'm crying so hard that there's a flood in my room... ;)

I can't even describe how much I liked that. Good work!

great short fic. just wish there was an epilogue for this. it was really good. ttyl. l8r