It doesn't seem to be enough, I understand that every story needn't reach a final conlcusion, but there is just too much left uncertain to even draw a conclusion from.

APPLAUSE! I like the way you write and the way you portray Hanabi. A nice sophisticated change of pace from the usual fandom blah. Thumbs up!

Absolutely Crazy man. I don't where you got the idea,
but brilliant. Definetely originally written, there are but a
few dozen authors here on with the ability&
capacity to write that well, with an sophisticated vocabulary
embracing the perspective inner thoughts and psychological
analysis of the characters/ mainly the protagonist
which you pour into this story.

this story was interesting to say the least I didn't really like it but it was worth reading for a couple of reasons.

1. is the way you portrayed the characters was actouly fascinating I like the non-stuttering hinata.

2. the way you write it is unlike any other story. so it is worth reading do to its various unique qualitys.

other than that the story was just strange.

that story made me think made me sad and most of all see hinabi in a whoooole new way theres only one other word to say ...wow

5/5

wow - that was amazing ! please update

eh that was pretty awesome!

This story was drastically beautiful, and I suppose the only way to explain that that statement would be to say; perfectly flawed.

I am sorry that my words may not make sense, and that I don't review your wonderfully written works, but this painted story was amazing - leaving me breathless with a feeling of almost-confusion but mostly-wonderment; An image burnt into my retinas.

I love your writing, to put it simply, and I wish you the best of luck with the future publication of your book. :)

Beutiful. This could(should?) be a live-action movie. Drama, dysfunctional incest(the only kind I can stomach), and an edge of insanity; a girl's quest to realize where exactly she fits.

On the pairings; I could almost say that there were touches of a Hiashi/Hanabi, and I was hoping for just a morsel of Hanabi/Moegi. Just my thoughts

Anyway, I'm telling you: Movie(fan-made), man. It would be epic. But you'd get sued if you made any money... Shame.

The story was very insightful. I admire the level of thought and maturity you put into this. A very good read.

very well done look into family dynamics

creepy...

hanabi is one of those characters. the ones who are blank, who can fit any role. i think only tenten, kiba and shizune can do it half as well as hanabi can.

she can wear many masks

Wow. Hanabi has some serious issues, no?

This was awesome. Very..deep, it seemed. And bizarrely, it was entirely believable as well.

Excellent work.

I love this. This is a deliciously complex characterisation for Hanabi. This little fic is not for the faint at heart.

On a technical level, you make some language mistakes and mix up some words and such things, but really, it's a copy edit sort of fix. The story itself is good for what it is and achieves exactly what it is meant to.

Thanks for sharing it. I don't get to see this kind of thing often, and it's my very favourite sort of writing.