um...wasnt expecting that but the whole story was VERY well written. 5 stars, A-plus. whatever you call it. Brilliant:)

I've read twinest before... but not for these two! This was cute and kept me guessing (though I figured it out... :) ) Good job and keep doin' yo thing!

Please, put some explicit sex on it. What happen this night? And after? They will be together, shes will be pregnant, or something else. Update soon.

Aw I thought they would be perfect for this 'storyline' lol. Thanks for writting it!

I love that you said "as always, I go where I'm needed" LOL... so umm have you ever seen the movie Hoot? I looked for a 'specific' story on there a few weeks ago and I was wondering if you could write one? THere isn't one and I really think there should be a few, but that's just me,lol.

Anyway It's fine if you don't want to, just a thought!

Loved it!

Crystal

Very well written. Not what I would usually read, but that's just cause I don't like cheating on a boyfriend/girlfriend. But this was pretty good!

I must say, I am very much against incest, especially twincest, but the actual structure of the story and the way it was written was quite good. I commend you on that, not the subject.

yay, another Viola/Sebastion story. You should continue it. Really.

I also have a Viola/Sebastion story up...It's called "When We're The Only One's Left"...check it out if you have the time! thanks!

I liked this story, this movie was great but not one of my favorites!

But I did think of them together. Great job I love it!

*Okay no offense, or maybe yes OFFENSE, but to any who read this and want to flame or leave an awful review in regards to how incest is so "wrong" and "gross"(which it is not gross), IF YOU DONT LIKE INCEST or the thought of it then the really really SMART thing to do would be to NOT READ IT. Gee that was really hard to figure out. I guess it does take a rocket scientist.*

i don't know, i thought it was an interesting idea.

im not meaning to be mean but WHAT WERE YOU THINKING! THEY ARE TWINS! THATS CALLED INCEST!

hope tht helped

One word...

ODD.

great fic , really loved it

oh wow...and incest fic, in this section?

you're weird.

but i will commend you on your writing, it was very well done, explicit and enthralling, and i didn't know who it was, or well i had a guess but it wasn't confirmed until you actually said his name, it was evident in the beginning that it was Viola, yet the male counterpart greatly intirgued this spurring my continuation in reading this fic.

and then thus i found a reason to want to follow it, and i hope you do, although i highly doubt you'll get more than one or two reviews, other than from myself, not only because this isn't a popular section but because you are writing about an incestuous couple.

but something tells me you know this already.

so kudos to you, and i guess in the end i am weird myself for i rather enjoyed this piece and look forward to more.

this...is amazing, there is something about it, i am almost afraid as to how you are going to continue it.

I didn't even know who the guy was till the end and then i was like "WOW" I was pretty freaked out and then i smiled, because it seemed not only like love but some major lust going on in there.

you must conquer this type of love in all sections dont'cha?

continue it.