NO! You must update! What happens to my Wally!?

I wish that you would update sometime soon... *looks hopeful* Your story is completely amazing. Definitely going on my favorites list! :D

-M3

Oh my. This is one awesome story! :D

Excitement! It is kind of like the Black Flash when you think about it though. Oh, yeah, I'm Keymasterc11. And I now bounce up and down in near incontainment of exuberance in waiting for the next chapter to be posted up. Your writing is great and clings to me like..like...superglue! Hope you don't get writer's block. Sayonara!

Even through his panic, even through his fear, Wally managed to focus. He looked straight at J'onn as Superman moved over from the other side, listening just as intently, and he spoke, two simple phrases that sent chills through his teammates.

"It's coming for me," he whispered. "I'm going to die."

This part of the chapter was amazing. You gave me goosebumps with that last line, especially. Wow.

I'm not sure this review will do anything since the last date was a long while back, but hey - a story this good deserves a review whether it'll be updated later or not.

Thanks for writing,

Ashe

OMFG this story is so good, whyd yu stop? Do update again?

Oh, the suspense! This is looking great, I'm looking forward to chapter 3.

Da Geckinator :D

Oh my God! that was SO awsome you have to continue PLEASE! I have to know what going to happen to Wally!! you have everything down right!

Love all the details and mysteries!
Update PLEASE?

Wow, I love this!! I've recently become reaquainted with Justice League, and I believe I have a doft spot for the youngest ones. They always inspire a feeling of protectiveness from their older peers and I love it!! Flash is my favorite! Thanks for writing this.

How could you leave it there!! You're killing me, you gave me chills. This is a fantastic story so far.. you've really handled the characters well, and the visuals are strong. I can imagine this awful blackness hovering readying to attack. Argh! Loving the Wally angst so much..

Please, please write more! *begs and pleads and offers fresh-from-the-oven chocolate chip cookies*

You got to finish this story, I want to know it all

:O I saw this over on deviantART and really liked it. I like where you're going with this!

Loving it! The last line was great! I can't wait to read more.

Whoa. This is creepily good! That whole "It's coming for me. I'm going to die" bit gave me shivers. This is a really good story. I can't help but wonder if this monster thing has anything to do with the Speed Force... probably not. Just my tired brain trying to think of a solution. Anyway, update soon, please!

moogsthewriter