I really love this! Very good writing. I know it has been a long time since you updated...but any chance of you finishing? Or at least writing an ending where she wakes up or something?? Even a brief description? haha

OMG, plz don't do this to me! I must know what happens! Will she wake up and not remember she married Darcy? Will she die? what? I'm so full of adrenaline right now since watching the 1rst season finale for MI-5 (coincidentally, a show with Matthew Macfayden as a main character too... what are the odds?o_O) it can't be good for the body... =P and this isn't helping! XD

Good story!

Why did you stop writing? This is a great story? Does she wake up, what happens next?

Not a good place to leave a wip, that's why I try to read only completed stories.

I know that authors like to have feedback for each chapter, however, when you read so many unfinished wip's that have been abandoned for months or years without even a hint of why, you just prefer not to begin another wip.

I sure hope you do continue with this story. It's so different!

this was a great story. Why did you stop writing it?

well what of his sister Georgiana?and will she ever wake up?update soon

excellent begginning, i hope she wakes up soon! please continue soon!

im still loving this story. and thanks for something less angsty lol it makes me smile

lushka

did you do a mass update, or did my computer just not see these 3 chappies? anywho, i am confused on what mrs. reynolds was talking about but whatever! good chapter!

i'm fine with the R+J i had to read and understand it last year, but just don't let darcy follow their pattern!

what condition does lizzy have?? anywho, please update soon!

I like the turn, the story has taken and I'm glad you decided to include the other characters as well. Love the Bingley couple.

cant wait till next chapter!

I love the direction you are going in this story!! Darcy overhearing Mrs. R was great. I can't wait to see what her thoughts lead him to do! Sorry I have given a reivew lately - been out of town. I do wish your posts were a bit longer (just greedy I know). :)

Keep writing!

Keep up the good work! I am enjoying the premise. My only comment is Darcy seems to be rather distant or out of touch with the need of closeness with Elizabeth, i.e. attendance at her bedside. I would think he would be attending her more... No? I guess this aspect of the story seems a bit rushed to me perhaps. I am looking forward to more chapters. Thanks for the story!

Mary Lynn