A great story. Very good.

Well written, very dramatic and ingriguing!

beautiful imagery :)

Well done!

This was a good piece! Angst.

I like the sequence you placed things in - unusual but i liked it very much!

Thanx for sharing!

Are you planning anymore?

Thank you for this angsty piece. Interesting sequence of events, I had to read it several times, just to make sure I got the faces right and learn how to interpret things.

Would love to see more from you!