XD

The mouse in Bunta's mouth. xD That will definitely NOT taste sweet.

Rikkai Crack (Or better yet, RiCRACK XD) is the best medicine...ever. Fo **. ♥

Okay, this is too much for me to handle! I'm trying not to hyperventilate from trying to recover my breath. I guess too much laughing can do that to you :)

Well, anyway, this is downright HILARIOUS, and cute! Although other people out there might think that some characters here were a bit OOC, I think otherwise. The Japanese are known to be clean and neat of their surroundings, so I guess it's a predictable reaction from the guys. And I really love it, seeing them freak out because of a teeny weeny mouse (actually I freak out too when I see one), they're so adorable.

Hope you do more humor fics like this, and please include Sakuno-chan as the only girl included with the guys if it's not too much trouble for you. I'd really love to see them in a humor fic you've written. Great job at this one!

~ Wings of Fidelity

P.S. This definitely goes to my faves :)

I CRIED! I FU*G CRIED and then choked and then fall out of chair from laughing so hard>
girl you killed me (in good way)
this was awesome!

LOL. SO THEIR WEAKNESS IS REVEALED! XD Totally random and hilarious! Nice job XD

ROFL so random.

OMFG... geez! im reading this in my school's library and it is so hard to have to stifle your laughter when your really have the strong urge to just let it all out! lol...hahahaha... ::breaths:: anyway! Awesome, great, fantastic and thanks for typing this up, it really brightened up my day. The OOC-ness oozes with hilarity

OH MY F* GOD! there's a rat! oh my god. oh my god. oh my god.
it went inside Marui's MOUTH?!?!?!?! OMG OMG omG Omg... and it's flattened and it squeeked!?! what active imagination you have! this was so hilarious but now i'm freaked out by the rat... thinking of Yuki (FUruba) helps only a little in waving off my fear of rats..
And this isn't a oneshot?! definitely going to wait for the next cracking chapter!
what frightful conditions the tennis players are in O.o hope they will survive... o.O

can't stop laughing

hahaha hahahahaha
hahaha hahahahaha
hahaha hahahahaha

they all showed their true colors eh??

THE RAT LIVES!! yes, you got a review in August!

oh...me...oh...cant..stop..laughing...whoot!...wow...hee hee he ehehehehehe,...

That was absolutely hirlarious! My sister sent it to me and although I usually don't read much Rikkaidai, that was great. Even if some people might have been a little OOC, it doesn't matter because it was so funny. I loved the appearances of the other players as well, that was a nice addition.

(runs around in circles, shrieking hysterically with laughter)

that was awesome! i hope you amke more stories like this!!

THis is AWesome! its was definetly amusing! :D

XD. A mouse caused all of that... XD... Poor mouse though... being flattened by Momo... XD I forgot all out Jackal and Niou... until they woke up at the end... Some things are better left alone. =)