did you have to make it so heart warming and touching?
I do love this, great insight.

(I don't think the problems caused by the VR are explored enough. Most people just leave it at 'VR causes him to be impulsive' But I like the idea that there was education and that they repeatedly taught him stuff. Sometimes when I think that they might have taught his military stuff, like to always follow orders and that. So that if they fixed his metabolism they could use him in the army.
There are many people obsessed with superspeed soilders.)

But yeah you brought great insight and I love the last line.
Love the whole thing really

when i was reading this i was all "this i sso sweet" then the last sentence just made me burst out laughing. dern you.

Very nice! I don't think the writers themselves could have put it any more into character.

:) That was adorable, and perfectly in-character. Writing a story from Bart's POV is difficult, but you managed to pull it off beautifully. Never stop writing fanfic - we need more of this brilliant stuff!

awesome. utterly awesome. arlene, youre goin on my favs list! youre a totally great author!

Lovely story, nice to see an indepth look at these two's thoughts on each other. Thanks!

Bart's section was definitely my favourite - I've never thought how he would write, but the constant brackets seems to suit him. His own personal style of narration. Made me smile - what better praise? ;)