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Tim Fortune
2008-05-27 . chapter 7
Awesome. Frickin awesome. Damn right they aren't gay. Sole reason why I won't touch 90% of the fics in the KH section. And the encounter with Larxene, brillent! A kudos my friend. Sorry you flipped flopped, but what else can be expected of fangirls? I only know one fangirl who isn't into yaoi. Well, whatever. Keep up the good work. I'd love to see how the men of WANG end up.
Windracer leopard
2008-04-06 . chapter 7
Oh my, this is very funny. Congratulations, by the way, upon entering the world of yaoi. As you have now seemingly discovered, it can be a very good thing when written properly. On the subject of the Organization members, well... How can you not think Marfluffia (I love that) is gay? When I first saw him, I thought he was a girl! (lol) I know Roxas and Namine look incredibly cute together, and I love them together, but I also like AkuRoku (only if it's well written) just because... well, I don't know. Now, i've finished discussing my views on the sexuality of various game characters, so , I shall review your story!
This is a fantastic story! It is ever-so-slightly crackish, but is still fantastically written, and has a sort-of plot. And it's so funny! Please, will you write more epic battle scenes? They are hilarious. And tell me who you think are gay? Please?
Okay, I'll shut up now. Please don't take offense to any of my comments.
-Windracer Leopard
Gail-chan
2008-03-06 . chapter 7
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! ROFL! THIS IS SO FUNNY!
SunflowerWielder
2008-03-02 . chapter 7
Wow, I laughed while reading this, A LOT!! Really really funny stuff.
"SWAT TEAM!"
Blue Jae
2008-03-02 . chapter 7
YAY! your back! Great chapter, I laughed through most of this. Still love it and can't wait for you to continue it!
Gail-chan
2007-11-29 . chapter 6
*laughs then falls off the chair* OUCH! That was funny especially Marluxia disguising himself as (force to) Maria...

but wait! what was Roxas seen in the drawing? and what happens when they found out that Maria was actuaqlly Marluxia in the TV station?


le gasp!


well i really liked the opinion in your first chapter! They shouldn't treat Marluxia & other organization like gays! i really hate people like that! i totally agreed with you!

but one thing i really hate the most!

People thinking Zexion is an E-M-O!

well the story so far is great! can't wait for the next one! and i hope that their plan will work well...
QJD1381
2007-10-27 . chapter 1
I agree! I hate Yaoi! it's so annoying! why must everyone assume that the main character is gay!? grow up ppl!
Witcher Co
2007-06-19 . chapter 6
First off if you can go add parody next to humor in the type. This is a weird parody as in it has an actual story line a pretty pointless and ridiculus story line but yeah. Well the humor isent as ridiculus as most I see it is more well I don't know tame/British yeah don't really know what to say to help.
Some Final Fantasy charcter should be at the TV station and they get get kicked out because Zexion doesent fight and Axel loses.
Blue Jae
2007-06-18 . chapter 6
I love this chapter! Yay, you used my plan!! I love it when my evil plans are used!
UnIQuE Not Weird
2007-06-18 . chapter 1
ZOMG! DIR EN GREY IS MENTIONED! *Dies*

Okay sorry, I'm a huge Dir en grey fan and... yeah. Really wasn't expecting them to be randomly mentioned in a KH fanfic. xD

Anyways, I love yaoi, but I respect your opinion because I know not everyone likes it.

Nice fanfic! ^^ Marluxia and flowers... Somehow doesn't surprise me. xD
Xejicka
2007-06-18 . chapter 6
LOL. Man is this plan going to back fire. I love it! Poor Marly.
Q. Fuller
2007-06-18 . chapter 2
Axel: Your W.A.N.G. Sora. That is what the Organization..is after. Got it memorized?
Sora: WHAT?!O.O
Axel: >_< Wait, that came out wrong.

Funny. Personally I don't indulge in the yaoi too often. I'm not gay, but it seems interesting, unless the characters are having sex, in which case I hit the back button, because I find that part sickening. In any case, your story seems like it will be a big hit soon. Make more
Rioxane12
2007-06-18 . chapter 6
Ahahaha! Maria is so pink! If my friend read this, she'd get steamed cuz she's a marly addict! This is so nice and Nami's clueless.

I totally agree with you, why do people think Roxas and Axel's gay when Rox has a girlfriend and Axel is just a really good friend. update soon, Rio12.

P.S. I know that in the hostile takeover, the tv station will film Marly somehow looking like he's a "cross-dresser". My prediction here hits the nail on the head! I know it! Because Marly's not suppose to be gay but he wears a dress without complaining! That backfires! And yeah! I love designer nobodies!
StarJen
2007-06-18 . chapter 6
LOL MARLY'S IN A DRESS!
Steven Kodaly
2007-06-18 . chapter 6
Now, why do I think that putting poor, put-upon Marluxia in drag will backfire horribly on Axel? I can't wait to see what happens next.
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