Your story is so good! PMS, yeah?

This is really nice, please keep it up :)

ahh they need to meet! but yay an update! good job, I enjoyed it.

oh no i feel so bad for ella! and char! :( i hope they get together soon!

I can't wait until the next update, nicely written (:

They didn't meet though :( but still. and stupid Dame Olga, being bossy.

I liked it.

Cute! Good idea!

Woah! that was absolutely awesome, write more, please, l mean, update soon!

Oh I like this! please update quick! It's awesome.

Uum, I read the second chapter and I don't like it so much so if you'll exuse me I don't think I want to keep reading this.
-bows in apology- I sent this review to tell you his sister's name. It's Cecilia. I had to read like half the book just to get that. -currently holding it- Good luck with your story, even if I am not one of your reviewers. I hope I didn't offend you.

It's a great idea for a story, and your writing style is good. Keep it up, and see where it goes.

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY !
I dont really get the alter ego thing though.
oh well !
write more !
(please)
:)
please ?
for me ?!
pretty please ?
please ?

I really liked it! The writing was very descriptive... It gave me the perfect image of where the characters stand in the story. I'm looking forward to reading the rest.

Love it.

Right, I neither loved it nor hated it (mostly I just skimmed through it and didn't really take the time to read it, I will in a minute) but could I ask one favor of you? Could you try and put it into smaller paragraphs? Large paragraphs are annoying and slightly discouraging to read. Thanks.