I'm a little confused here-is this Pam imagining things going differently or...parallel universe? I think it's probably the former, but if it was why did Pam imagine herself saying the same things and having no control over it if she was daydreaming a changed scenario?
Well it's pretty good anyway.

Your writing is absolutely beautiful. You write great descriptions that make it easy to get the reader hooked.

I guess the only thing I'm slightly confused about is how exactly this "deja vu" is happening. Is it a dream? Has Pam stepped into the Twilight Zone? The ending sort of clears it up, but I had a little bit of a hard time following what was happening.

But that could just be me and the mush my brain has turned into due to Spring Break :) Overall, I loved it. Great job!