that was extra corney with a side of cheese...but it was still good.

Nice story, The Trance explaination is better then some. Who knows, After next season I may look at this and wish the writers had come up with anything this good.

space alien, that was really sweet. I wish Trance had been able to help Tyr too! (do I smell a sequel?) ) I also liked the way you used Trance's tail to illustrate her mood. Well done )

That was actually pretty sweet.

Hehe, that was really great )

Really, then what is that F doing on your report card! J/K ! I enjoyed it, please write more!

that was so sweet! Especially Trance talking to the angel at the end, and how everyone was so concerned about Harper! Keep writing!

Great, right a sequal, like New Years or something...

Awww, that was really sweet! hah! Never thought of that one for Trance's past! :)

Cute. Very original. It left me with a happy feeling. Great job! My only constructive criticism is that you need a beta reader to catch the spelling and grammar errors. Other than that your story is wonderful. Very emotional. I love that you leave us with a happy ending.

What a neat twist at the end space Alien. I liked it.

I thought that was really cute!

This was neat. You really manage to capture Trance. Godd job.

That was so cute and sweet. I liked it a lot, even if Christmas is 6 months away :D

ok. great story. you made it long, but not to long. and short. but not to short. you really got it down. ::big goffy smile:: keep up yhe goos work! :)