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Kitten Kisses
2007-10-01
ch 2,
abuseThis was an interesting chapter. I rather liked it, though not as much as the first one. I just adore Hector, so I'm glad that you wrote about him. I do wonder if you will ever update this, though. If not, that's fine, but it would be nice to read more. It's getting increasingly hard to find FE7 stories out there that are any good (or that are to my tastes, anyway).

The little moral behind this one was nice. I would have never have thought of it, myself. Keep up the great work!

Cheers,
Ciao,
-Manna
Kitten Kisses
2007-10-01
ch 1,
abuse=O Aw, that was so sweet! I think Kent might have been just a tad too forward, kissing all her scars like that. It seems a little OOC for him. But then again, it's 5:12am, and I'm so tired I could drop. Too bad I'm not going to bed, though. Nope, I'm headed off to work soon. Ugh.

Anyway, this was an interesting piece, I must say I enjoyed it immensely.

Cheers,
Ciao,
-Manna
BlackMoonWhite
2007-05-22
ch 2,
abuse@w@ Ahh, this was more thought-provoking than usual. Reminds me somewhat of 'Someone Sightless'. ELIWOOD! You...you *sniff*...need a hug! *HUGS*

Hm. Personally, I think memories, good or bad, never truly disappear. There will always be something, even something seemingly insignificant (like, a boulder), that will remind us of that memory. Even if they fade with time, and nothing lasts forever, our 'scars' will stay with us. Because, well, our experiences make up who we are, right? Erm, my opinion. =D

"And someday, decades from now, wind and rain will wear those cuts away, and no one will ever know that this old tree used to be our scorekeeper. Perhaps even it itself will forget." --I don't know why, but I really like this line. It's really, hard to explain, but it makes me feel happy/content/some-happy-feeling. Don't know why. One of those things. :D

Sorry for rambling on like that. I'm looking forward to that SethxEirikaxLyon fic!
Rexnos
2007-05-02
ch 2,
abuseWell written and though out, though completely and utterly emo. Hector doesn't really strike me as one to think about things in this manner, even after years have gone by and he's been ruling Lycia and such. Still, good stuff in the end.

Later,
Rex
Subieko
2007-05-02
ch 2,
abuseO...I like this chapter very much. Eliwood and Hector are both SO in-character, and they're dealing with issues that they definitely would have after all they've been through. Ahh...and I like how it's sort of angsty-sad, but it has an uplifting ending! ^_^ As excellent as ever, SDK! Glad to see you back, also.
Rexnos
2007-03-11
ch 1,
abuseSorry I couldn't review earlier. I've been out of town since last Saturday. Spring Break and all ya know... I only have about twenty fic chapters from various authors to catch up on. If only there was enough time in a day...

Anyway, excellent writing as usual. Even before looking at the chapter, I had a sneaking suspicion that the first one would be a KentxLyn... You have a certain affinity for that pairing.

Gah... I'll give you a better review next chapter... I feel like crap right now...

Later,
Rex
Saru
2007-03-09
ch 1, anon.
abuseAh, this was perfect in every way!

... Except that it was too short...! Your writing it far too good, and there is definitely not enough KentxLyn out there.

I can't wait until you update :D
Biggoron
2007-03-08
ch 1,
abuseAh... more awesome writing from you. Well, as usual, I'm gonna continue to read and review. I expect good things to come from this... and the first chapter is by no means a dissappointment at all. Keep up the fantastic work!
-Biggoron
Gatewalker
2007-03-08
ch 1,
abuseNice fluffy fic. If this is placed in the time I think it is(ie: after Lyn's mode but before Eliwood's) then...isn't Kent being a little too forward in the end there?

Ah well, don't mind me. I'm writing myself today, so I'm being extra nitpicky. Still, it's a good read.
BlackMoonWhite
2007-03-07
ch 1,
abuse...xD! That was so. SWEET. Ooh, the sappiness! -melts- It's a good thing, trust me. ...Actually, maybe that's not such a great idea, since I'm such a hopeless romantic at heart. >_>

"But she did not take her hand away, so Kent did not stop; moving his lips over her scars until he had kissed every one."

>_
peter
2007-03-03
ch 1, anon.
abuseNice...I like it. Please continue!
Lao Who Mai
2007-03-03
ch 1,
abuseGAH! The sappiness! It's so...so...FLUFFY! More than Sesshomaru! Kent is so knightly and chivalrous and knightly and honorable and...Well, Galahad never had a chance. Anyway! To the review! Basically...I liked it. The idea of Lyn receiving scars and keeping them to remind herself of a lesson sounds like something she would definitely do, and Kent was in character all the way. In a nutshell, Kent was...Kent. Yeah.
Whatever THAT means.
I thought you did a pretty good job. The topic is a bit redundant considering all the other knightly romance fics between Lyn and Kent, but you can write whatever you want. Good job!
FireEdge
2007-03-03
ch 1,
abuseYay, I love KentLyn sappiness! Anyway, I just randomly stumbled upon your story and I must say that I really liked it. The way you write is both funny and serious at the same time (which is very enjoyable, by the way), so it was easy to get hooked on the story. There were quite a few times where your descriptions or thoughts of/from Kent made me smile. He's such a fun character to mess around with. I would write more, but I don't know what else to say. Great job, though!
umeko-rin
2007-03-03
ch 1,
abuseAw, it was sappy, but very very sweet... you make me like Kent x Lyn stuff! I like the scar-for-rememberance idea, it fits with Lyn well.

-Ume
Subieko
2007-03-03
ch 1,
abuseAw...that's so adorable! ^_^ I love when Kent acts all knightly...and it's nice to Lyn thinking about happy times with her family and laughing. I like the whole idea of scars as a theme for short fics, too.
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