Beautiful story

are u going to add anything to this fic?

Please. write another.

nevermind. You did make another but, I still want more. Remember talent comes a long way.

That's sweet- not overly fluffy or anything, though you have irritated my inner SD fangirl with your implied happy ending.

And is it wrong that I interpreted #9 as implied-yet-obviously-unrequited BobbySpader?

(Sorry, I just feel canon needs more slash. Not graphic slash, which I can't see the point of, it's just... cute.)

I like your drabbles, though- even though they're simple in some areas, the other sentences are full of meaning and well-expressed.

-Wolf

There are no words good enough, wait, great enough, to describe this story. These are the only things I came up with:
Beautiful
Light
Amazing
Lovely
Enjoyable
Understandable
Dramatic
Dreamy
Inspiring
Suspense
Wonderful
PERFECT!
And Many Many More!
UPDATE PLEASE! *on hands and knees*


Keep writing on this story. It is awesome, there is another on! I loved this. Please write more! Please! I loved it! It was beautiful. Did I already say that. Update, update, update, update!


-Flare and Zale
or
-Flare (Zale's Girl)

wow. it's short but beautiful.

Aww, I really liked this story, and even though I'm relatively new to the world of Pendragon fan-fic, this is definitely the kind of story that will stand out in my mind. Each part was short and very to-the-point, but you kept it consistent and made that brief style work. Kudos to you. :D

wow. that was absolutely beautiful. I hope you do another bobby/loor story (a longer one), and I can't wait to read it. I am always looking for good pendragon fanfiction, but I'm usually dissapointed, so it was great to read this. you did an excellent job. I hope you write more.

wow. that was really good!

It seems unfinished. And it's not exacly a fic. It's more of a long-winded statment. I hope to read a story about this couple from you once you get a little better. Keep up the good work!

Hobby Ho!

~F.K.

Nice one.

I like this.

I like it... The description is awesome... much better than my newly developed describing.

I like it... thanks for explaining too. ^_^