Yay! ^^ That was great! Go Alviss! Fave character still. :D

writting keeps the plot bunnies from exploding out of your head too.

its not strange, its very nice. i love the poem. will there be more?

Yay, I say. Very interesting. LOL I really think you have a talent for MAR stuff.
Now, if only we could get that MAR section up so that more people'll read. lol

Cute story, the poem was really well written.