The poem, it's so warm, really i love it! Though its short, you made it beautifully. Nuriko always there for Miaka and I love Nuriko for being her bestfriend, than Yui. But I can't blame Yui for being that harsh on Miaka.

*sniffles* wow. thats pretty good. I'm a big poetry critic and i was kinda wondering if you were kinda struggling to think of words that rhymed? also, was there supposed to be a rhythem to it? I really liked the whole bit about the sunset helping Nuriko to let go of his little sister. And how he was talking to her, because the wind would carry his voice to her. That was amazing! keep up the great work, and work on your poetry!! I can't wait to read more from you!

aww...how cute!! XDXD