I don't know what to say about this, except that it's great writing.

Geez, why does everybody always kill off Mal? Very well written, and the last one was simply too heart-wrenching. Great job!

I like that! But I have a sick weakness for character death stories. Good stuff.

Very sad, but great work.

Wow! I started crying. You are a very talented writer

Oh, that made me so sad, and then Mal dying made it ten times worse. I need to go find some chocolate or something to cheer myself up! Very well written.

Again, you write the characters just as they should be. Made me cry. Very good fic.