love this chapter

Okay. Now why didn't you finish this. I really want to know what happens! Please finish it. Does Naruto not love Sasuke as much any more, is his love for Sai now and his feelings are confused with Sasuke? And why doesn't Sasuke move any further? Would that make a difference for Naruto and realize how he is cheating on Sai?
Seriously, what is going to happen next. I think this is really good. I'm quite intrigued. Please say you'll continue with this. Onagai! O.O *pouting*
-CPS

yay! Hooray for sasuxnaru^-^ i like your story so far(= update soon pls ^^ i'm a very impatient person sorry hahaha...uhm...
ah...may i ask how you're about...well to continue this story? i mean are you(or sasuke xD whatever..) going to tell it from the very beginning and then after a few chapters it comes to this point, or will you well continue and add flashbacks where its shown how it became like this or ...uh...can't explain the next one >< ah...well...i guess i have to wait and see how you're planning to continue^-^
(and...sorry i know my english is awful ^^)
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now this has nothing to do with the story but i looked up if there are more sasuxnaru or more sasuxsaku stories...and i was shoked! more sasuxsaku (or maybe i just looked it up wrong) but we can't let something horrible like this happen! so hurry up and write more more more sasuxnaru! we need to surpass those sasuxsaku fans! xD ...yeah...i didn't write one story and now i want everybody else to do so x) well...i would write one if there wasn't this lack of writing skills in my head^^ besides... you can see in this review how horrible it sounds when i speak english...
But i'm digressing...
so what did i want to say again? oh yeah right...continue on like this(am i overhasty?again?) and...when you find two words that would fit in, decide on one ^^ it's maybe just me but it looks odd when you write e.g. "'blahblah' he said/put"