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pbk
2009-10-29 . chapter 15
Wonderful! Now where's that epilogue?
ms Masen
2009-08-23 . chapter 15
that was so...AWESOME! she finally admitted she loves him:D
PLEASE update soon. ugh, i'm dying...
CYLi
2009-07-21 . chapter 15
Woah, sexy ending!

Heart0fGlass, I like your story! Really took me in. You're so evil with the handsome Tom, really. How can we fans resist him? *sigh* we will faint before you get to the end of the story.

I also like how you didn't go too far with the descriptions during the intimate parts, unlike many authors on this site.

I found Chap. 15's ending very cliche, like, say, Casablanca or Mr. and Mrs. Smith, but that's okay :) I love love/hate relationships. It makes the love so much more interesting, complex, and irrestible.

Look forward to more posts!
ashely barbishka
2009-07-08 . chapter 15
omg!if u haddent said that was the end, i wouldve thought it was!im tingling akk over!(not like that u perv) i absolutely luv it im glad there 2getr sorry potter but once u cross to the dark side...u never go back...i cant wait for the epiloge!ill b watching! (that didnt sound stalkerish at all!)
ashely barbishka
2009-07-08 . chapter 14
oh...im hungry...>.<...lol newho...omg! shes finally out!...T.T i miss tom! lol i wanna find out wat happens now... -team_renesmee
ashely barbishka
2009-07-08 . chapter 13
aw all bullies have a soft side!and all dark lords have a soft spot for thier little babies! i luved this chap...wen school starts again, im reading every harry potter book then buying all the movies...ive seen a few...but nver read em...on2 ch14! -team_renesmee
ashely barbishka
2009-07-08 . chapter 12
lolz...butter...incident...lolz once again...luv it!omg! -team_renesmee
ashely barbishka
2009-07-08 . chapter 11
lol luv that ending2!i wouldnt want 2 live in a castle...i wish i could criticise u...to help u no..but i cant find nething to do that on! -team_renesme
ashely barbishka
2009-07-08 . chapter 10
is she on him or not?!ah! gotta find out! -team_renesmee
ashely barbishka
2009-07-08 . chapter 9
YAY!i absolutely adored that ending...i luv how perverted he is...wish i were ginny...wat i would do in that situation...ALIENS! ok im cool now...more reading! on the double.oh!btw once again good job on personalities! i could almost hear snape talking keep up the good work!
ashely barbishka
2009-07-08 . chapter 8
ok...i can excuse the absence of a funny endind cuz theres a bunch of funnies throughout the chap...i wonder wat snape wanted?...i must say u've captured ginnys personality perfectly...luv it -team_renesmee
ashely barbishka
2009-07-08 . chapter 7
aw!...hey! that 1 didnt end funny. . .(those were angry spacings)...newho...still adored the chapter! -team_renesmee
ashely barbishka
2009-07-08 . chapter 6
lmfao!i luv it!-the last sentece that is- not that i dont luv the whole chapter! i dont really understand if fremin was trying to rape or eat ginny...either way...that was scury...YES I WANT M RATING! that would b awesome...it always makes books more interesting...kinda like...newho..another alien problem..i wanna read! -team_renesmee
ashely barbishka
2009-07-08 . chapter 5
even if ur chs r short...u sure no how to end them!each last sentance/paragragaph make me laugh...ur very talanted, like my bf kim...shes on here2...newho...lost in thought 4 a sec there...im reading now! -team_renesmee
ashely barbishka
2009-07-08 . chapter 4
i like the last few sentances in this ch 2...i dont mind ur chs being short...i so new she was pregnant huh? i gotta read mo! -team_renesmee
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