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| 34bubbles 2008-04-13 ch 13, anon. | abusehey ur storying is really good i hope you continue it |
| Elliesmeow 2008-03-07 ch 13,  | abuseThat was sad. And much as I agree Warrick can go out with other people surely there were other options not as awkward as someone else Sara worked with? And having her not be ready doesn't mean no, so how long is too long to wait? Makes me think there must not have been enough love there to begin with. So yeah, sad. Hope the next chapter isn't as sad. Thanks for posting. -Ellie |
| csimouse 2008-02-16 ch 13, | abusegood story. keep going. |
| Meg-Breanne 2008-01-24 ch 13, | abuseAw, I feel so badly for Sara. But I'm definitely impressed with the revisions that you made. :) The broken picture frame of their last family photo definitely struck a chord with me. Awesome update. |
| jdcocoagirl 2008-01-21 ch 13, | abusewow love the drama and how sara is turning to be a jealous little girlfriend. update soon. |
| toothchick 2008-01-19 ch 13, | abuseI am so happy to see and read an update! It seems that Warrick wants to have his cake & eat it too! |
| bene 2008-01-19 ch 13, | abuseI'm really glad to see our update. I like the way you write Sara's doubts and the relationship with Warrick. Please continue. Thanks! |
| toothchick 2007-11-11 ch 12, | abuseOK, I am a die hard GSR fan, but this story is really good. I have read some of your other stories and decided to read more. I didn't even realize that it was Sara/Nick until I began reading. I look forward to reading the updates!! |
| Liz 2007-10-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseI just got done reading Going On. And I have to tell you that it was great. It's not often a story will make tears fall down my face when I'm trying to read, but this one did. It was very good and realistic. Thank you for sharing your talent. I could feel Sarah's pain and going on alone. |
| Meg-Breanne 2007-10-18 ch 12, | abuse:D I love it, but then again, you already knew that! :) |
| Kristafied 2007-10-18 ch 12, | abuseTerrific chapters! The awkwardness between Sara and Warrick is quite realistic, as is Greg's characteristic blurt. Looking forward to the next installment. |
| jdcocoagirl 2007-10-18 ch 12, | abuseooh no! i love all the agst and the pondering of the story, great job. update soon. |
| meester 2007-10-18 ch 12, | abuseplease update soon! |
| bene 2007-08-05 ch 11, | abuseExcellent way of showing Sara's emotions. I was really glad to see your update. Please continue. Thank you. |
| Meg-Breanne 2007-08-05 ch 11, | abuseWell, you already know that I love it. But it doesn't hurt to tell ya again. :) I'm anxious for the next chapter, just like always! :) |