I really loved this film. It illustrates to me what love really is, and everything that is still so wrong and still goes very wrong in our world these days.

I want this ending to be how it ended. If only we did not see Victoria standing by at the very end, it could very well have ended this way.

Hey! I was searching for spanish's fics of Lost and Delirious and... well, I wasn't found anything. But I understan english too, so I read this. And It's beautiful, so correct.. I really liked it.
Congratulations for this story... you made me happy for a second, haha.
Sorry for my bad english, and... bye!

I don't care the original end this is the one that I want and no one can say otherwise :P I love your alternative sorry the real end xD

This is exactly the end that such a great story deserved... This is definitely my favourite fic of Lost and delirious, I love it )

Amazing! You should make one with a lot of chapters!

That was really nice, I really enjoyed it. You did well with the words, and it was so nice to hear things being put bluntly for once!

My critique is this: The whole 'gay' labeling thing annoyed me slightly though, since it was emphasized in the movie that it didn't really matter about the labels, and Paulie had said "I'm not a lesbian, I'm just a girl in love with Tori" or something similar to that, and I thought that was really beautiful. But I can understand the need for a clarification and the fright of actually using the word "gay", which is also something they have to fight.

Besides that, this is definitely an ending most of us would've enjoyed after watching the real and sad ending. It's just such a tragic movie.

you should make a part two with the girls in college. BTW this story is awsome i love it :)

Thank you for giving a happy ending to this movie.

i love this: ) Good work

See that is so the way it should have ended! Great work for not letting her die and for keeping the characters the same as they originally were. It would be so easy to change them to fit a plot line. Great job.

thank you so much! I can sleep better now, with this ending... ;) great job!

You see, that is how the moie should have ended. I thinkt the first time i saw it I might have teared up a little, don't know why I went out and bought it. Nicely done.

This was o.k., but I think the movie should have ended will Tori being in a mental institution. SHe did say that sh'ed totally lose it without Paulie.

Wow. That was awesome. There's not much more I can really say - I'm still trying to put my words together.

But yeah, I'm so happy that you wrote fiction for this movie, it's one of my all time favorites. (Also one of the two that always, ALWAYS makes me cry to no end. The other is Titanic.)

Paulie said one of the most true and beautiful things ever - "Love just is." It's probably one of the things that got me to fully come out as bi. :) So once again, thank you for adding to this wonderful movie - it's true that we never really SAW Paulie die, and this is the perfect ending. They make such a perfect couple.