Hiiiiii :D U should really keep going with the story :) I really like it :P Update as soon as possible ;)

Hey, I love what you did here. I know you said you didn't think a full story would be worth it, but I think with the right plot you'd work magic. :P

Aw, that was cute! I'd love for there to be more, but I totally get what you mean about there not being much of an audience. An enjoyable oneshot all the same, cheers!

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You should make this into a full story, because this one-shot was just amazing!

Loved it. This was brilliant. xx

Write the full story ! Please !

Kudos to you! I think you should definitely consider adding more- because Mickey IS irresistible, and I love the way you write! Also, the Pikey accent is hard enough to understand, let alone read! But you pulled it all together really well. :)

And it doesn’t really need to be said that I am curious as to how the story might unfold further for dear Juliet and her brother.

P.S. Fluff is good! ;)

ello ow' you do'n i have to say ye realy good at write'en story's lass i have a bit-o pikey in me and proud of it keep on writeing those story lassy erin go braght - pikey lass

Aw! I loved it! Mickey's so cute!

Heh, brilliant. :D I wouldn't mind being Juliet right there. :P Anyway, if you ever write anymore Snatch fanfiction (especially if it's a MickeyOC :D) then please let me know!

Gotta agree with the other reviewers, you *really* should consider expanding on this fic. We all would certainly thank you. ;) It's really lovely and fun. Your OC is wonderfully grounded and real. I love that she reads like someone I would know; like someone any of us could be. Really, the more I think about this story the more I like it.

Great story! I thoroughly enjoyed it. Very well written and you captured the voices perfectly. Although it was cute it wasn't sickeningly so; I usually hate OC but you wrote yours nicely. And what a great concept (exactly right, who in their right mind could resist Mickey?). I'd enjoy seeing this continued, but it works quite well on it's own.

this was so cute! just loved it, you're very good

Really enjoyed reading this fic, you should turn it into a multi-chapter fic!

Also you write very well.

Thats a good story. REally entertaining.