i loved this story when i first read it and i just found it again after a while and i fell in love all over again. please come back and update soon i really miss this story and want more.

great story, though you have not updated in ages
poor Trunks, he is getting really fustrated, and he is so much better than Ash
I really like Vegeta in this story too, he is the same arrogant saiyan, but is caring too, so sweet.
I would prefer there to be no Videl thing, Gohan needs his Trunks!
but well done anyway!

wow,i like this fic now. initially, i felt a bit weird since i thought gohan was not the kind of person that easily mad at anyone. however, as i read deeply the story, i got it why he did that to goku or others. he was still the gohan that used to be, just changed by some unwilling situations.

i am wondering if you are still writing this fic. it seems that you have stopped updating this fic for long time. please, update, i like this fic very much!

Really good story so far! I like it alot... Just one thing though: When are you going to update it? Hm?

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UP DATE UPDATE UPDATE PLEASE

AWW it ended! please write more soon! THANKS AND BYE:D

Hey whats the holdup why havent u updated this story is good and it deserves to be acknowledged. neways gohan and Mirai are hott and they look cute together. so get to crackin on that update andbring joy into ur readers hearts again:>

Fantastic fic! I can't wait to read more, please post the next chapters soon!

i realy love this story and would like the orginal story so if you could please send it to me i would love it. i really love all your stories though this is my favorite please keep going you are a great writter.

please update soon i really love this story and can't wait to find out what trunks does next.

hey. i think ur story is awesome. u have a great writing style and i like how ur portraying the characters. i especially like how u are portraying gohan. few ppl manage to pull off a dark gohan fic as well as u have.

in regards to ur idea of having a gohan/videl side story later on in the fic, i can't say i really like the idea. its not that i dont like the g/v pairing but more that its obvious in ur fic that gohan doesnt swing that way. frankly i think the tension between ash/gohan/trunks is more than enough. i cant wait to see how how both trunks and ash react to gohan liking both of them.

please update soon!

please update soon, I want to know what will happen with their relationship (Gohans and Trunks) DBZ stories are becoming fewer and fewer the way I see it... anyway please just update a.s.a.p. ok?

thumbs down on the videl/gohan.
i want more! please write!
this is an amazing fic that totally draws me in.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write more!

i think this is realistic. like teenage rebellion and what teens do ,you know? oh, please have mirai and gohan end up together!

kind of confused.
is gohan smoking pot or tacbacco?