 starlette 8/7/03 . chapter 1 ok, although I am a big Rafe&Evelyn fan, and i really do think they belonged together, this was a good story. I wasn't much for the plot, but I did really like your style and you had great metaphors. |
 Lola22 9/27/01 . chapter 1 I LoVE IT. I always thought that she loved Danny more, anyway. It kinda seems like it at parts, don't you think? |
 hiro 7/21/01 . chapter 1 awesome! I really love the way you told the story, the broken mirror and empty reflections bit... that was just awesome! So angsty and touching indeed... *sigh*... loved this one... write more ph fic, please? |
 Mutant Horse 7/21/01 . chapter 1I think your a very talented writer and i visited this after Broken Mirrors, i love this, but the evelyn thangs a bit old. but its all good |
 Shaena 7/11/01 . chapter 1 That's how I imagined it would all play out. |
 Imhotep Ardeth Bey 7/9/01 . chapter 1i see...next write the part about her finding out danny died! that part was awsome though! |
 allison 7/8/01 . chapter 1 VERY good! wonderfully written, fantastic! well done! |
 Kim 7/6/01 . chapter 1 WOW really emotional, I really liked it. |
 Liz Moore 7/6/01 . chapter 1 This is getting ridiculous. If someone is going to write another AU story about Evelyn loving Danny more (hard to believe), I wish they would say so in the introduction so that those of us who feel opposite can avoid these stories. |
 HuntressMinerva 7/6/01 . chapter 1So beautiful! This has definitely earned its place on my favourites! |
 MoronicShrewdon't feel like signing in 7/5/01 . chapter 1 DUDE, I loved it. I hope you write more. |
 ashkickerchic 7/5/01 . chapter 1this is very good, very good! |
 Tinabean 7/5/01 . chapter 1 I loved it. I feel the same way. about Evelyn loving Danny more |