It's refreshing to read read a Jonda nowadays that keeps both characters in character.

Aw! I liked it! It was cute!

Loved the story it was perfect Jonda fluff! A hell of a way to start reading again.
Finally I have internet again!
Well I'm of to read the other fic.

So sweet!

Wow, you did an excellent job of going through their emotions. *sighs* just proves they were meant to be. now if only Marvel understood this.

I like how you used the present tense the whole time because it made it seem more personal or something. Sometimes present tense bugs me but somehow you pulled it off! I love it and I love Jondas! And I commend you on a great little one shot!

Love it! Rock on. Beautiful insight! I like that the fact they don't understand each other all the time makes them even more infactuated.

Going in the C2!

YAY!! Jonda!! Heheh, I like it. ^_^... though, a bit short... still cute.

You know, I don't think I've seen Jonda looked at this way before. I think a lot of people instantly throw them together because they are 'insane' or fun...but I think a fanon relationship is so much more believable when you can put angst, conflict, and pure emotion behind it.

And when I put it that way it makes me wonder why there aren't fifty million other Jondas out there that do the same thing. What a shame, lol.

Anyhow, I guess I was referring to his obsessions. You paralleled them all perfectly and gave a lot more depth to John's curiosity of Wanda, what draws him to her, and what keeps him there. See, most dipshits will stick Amara with him and keep it all about the physical existence of fire. What a load of crap, I hate them together! I think Wanda could provide so much more complexity and depth to their relationship, and you proved just that with this piece. I like introspective pieces once in a while just to show raw emotion...nothing else but feeling.

Excellent work as usual, and I hope to read more soon :)

Kristen

OH MY GOD! I love this...I really, REALLY love this. you should do more like it...maybe one from wanda's point of view?