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| joyrid3 2008-10-07 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant! I'm usually much more coherent than this but all I can say now is like...uh...WOW. *drop of drool comes out of gaping mouth* Ino was blindingly in character and Shikamaru too...well if one thinks ShikaIno to be slightly canon, like I do. Choji however was a bit off...I can't imagine Choji spitting venomously or being rotten with envy. I can relate to his envy and anger, but it's just not like him. But that didn't damage the story at all and apart from the frequent repetition of blue eyes, which didn't bother me at all (so I have no idea why I'm saying this, maybe I just feel the need to criticize SOMETHING :)), this was a wonderful story! Thank you for the great read! |
| luvless191 2008-08-07 ch 1, anon. | abusewow. this story was freaking amazing! i loved it! can't wait to read more of your stuff! |
| 10Sasu10-10Neji10 2008-07-29 ch 1, | abuseI loved it, it made me cry at the end..poor ChoujiT-T |
| Naiya-Hime 2008-07-21 ch 1, | abuseAw, this was really sad! I liked it though. Great job! -Naiya |
| Suicidal Butterfly 2008-03-21 ch 1, | abuseAw. I'm not a fan of Ino Chouji. In fact, I only like Ino with Shikamaru, but I almost felt sorry for the poor guy. Both of them, actually. That had to add strain to their friendship. And then Ino had no idea what Shikamaru was trying to tell her, even when it was kind of obvious what he was trying to say. But that's Ino for you. She never even suspected that two guys could like her at once. ... Or maybe I'm reading too much into it. I've been known to do that. But I loved the story. I really did. I'm glad I read it! Meep! |
| StaleCookie 2008-01-29 ch 1, | abuseWow I really loved this story! I feel that the characters are very well characterized. good job! =] |
| Jenny 2007-09-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseI loved it! I'm glad it ended the way it did, ShikaIno belong together anywayz. good job. |
| someone special1122 2007-08-21 ch 1, | abusenice story, I loved it |
| partyrockstar100 2007-07-26 ch 1, | abuseawesomee story :) and i have to say, i always love how you end your stories. esp how your stories aren't always like the happily ever ending scenario, but still awesome and not terribly sad. anyways cant wait to read more of your stories in the future! |
| Maki-Zushi 2007-06-30 ch 1, | abuseThis is just as good as 'White Drug' and that's good! |
| Evalen 2007-05-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was REALLY good. No not good but awsome i oved the whole thing. It was sweet and cute but also sad. I felt bad for Chouji. But oh, well. Hope there will maybe be a sequel to it. XD Anyway that was great, really well-written. |
| Kuro-Baara 2007-05-20 ch 1, | abusestranely addicting! not fair you should make these into one story like you now just diffrent stories. cant wait to read the next one] -kirsht |
| Nukumi 2007-05-09 ch 1, | abuseI liked it :) So angsty and full of surprises, definitely worth the read. I love a jealous Shikamaru :D |
| darkninja21 2007-04-03 ch 1, | abuseIt was a good story but I kinda hate how Shika and Chouji nevere mended their broken friendship. I also hate how Chouji thinks Shik saw her behind his back (well he kinda did). And other than that it was a good story! |
| Imprisoned Fire 2007-03-30 ch 1, | abuseOuch, I feel bad for Choji. That would be a (emotional) blow to end all blows. I must say, I'm not the bigest fan of love triangles, I'm not sure why but I'm not. This story is still good though, despite my dislikement of triangles. ShikaIno is one of those pairings I enjoy reading from time to time. You did a good job writing this. You descride emotions and details very well and did a god job at keeping everyone in character. I like how you played the title into the story, it was a nice touch to the ending. Good job. I look forward to reading more. |