Wow I LOVED it! I feel sorry for Chouji, Shika really DOES get everything! Anyway I still love it, plz make more Shikaino fics!

I swear to god! This is the best story I've ever read! You have great skills! I'm very fascinated with the way you write! Pls. I beg of you! write more shikaino stories! pls!

I'm not a huge fan of Ino&Chouji because I believethat Chouji would accept ShikaIno and support them you know? Lol. I just hve that idea. And Chouji seems kind of out of character.. other than that, everything was fantastic!

Brilliant!
I'm usually much more coherent than this but all I can say now is like...uh...WOW. *drop of drool comes out of gaping mouth*
Ino was blindingly in character and Shikamaru too...well if one thinks ShikaIno to be slightly canon, like I do.
Choji however was a bit off...I can't imagine Choji spitting venomously or being rotten with envy. I can relate to his envy and anger, but it's just not like him.
But that didn't damage the story at all and apart from the frequent repetition of blue eyes, which didn't bother me at all (so I have no idea why I'm saying this, maybe I just feel the need to criticize SOMETHING :)), this was a wonderful story!
Thank you for the great read!

wow. this story was freaking amazing! i loved it! can't wait to read more of your stuff!

I loved it, it made me cry at the end..poor ChoujiT-T

Aw, this was really sad!
I liked it though.
Great job!
-Naiya

Aw. I'm not a fan of Ino Chouji. In fact, I only like Ino with Shikamaru, but I almost felt sorry for the poor guy. Both of them, actually. That had to add strain to their friendship. And then Ino had no idea what Shikamaru was trying to tell her, even when it was kind of obvious what he was trying to say. But that's Ino for you. She never even suspected that two guys could like her at once.
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Or maybe I'm reading too much into it. I've been known to do that. But I loved the story. I really did. I'm glad I read it! Meep!

Wow I really loved this story! I feel that the characters are very well characterized. good job! =]

I loved it! I'm glad it ended the way it did, ShikaIno belong together anywayz.

good job.

nice story, I loved it

awesomee story :) and i have to say, i always love how you end your stories. esp how your stories aren't always like the happily ever ending scenario, but still awesome and not terribly sad. anyways cant wait to read more of your stories in the future!

This is just as good as 'White Drug' and that's good!

That was REALLY good. No not good but awsome i oved the whole thing.
It was sweet and cute but also sad. I felt bad for Chouji. But oh, well.
Hope there will maybe be a sequel to it. XD
Anyway that was great, really well-written.

stranely addicting! not fair you should make these into one story like you now just diffrent stories. cant wait to read the next one]
-kirsht