your story is absolutely beautiful and enchanting,but at the same time sorrowful, all characters ACTUALLY STAY in character unlike most yuffie/vincent/shelke i have read. it is sad, 4 me at least, to know that yuffie and vincent were probably and most likely never meant to engage romantically and your story shows that truth in a way that is soft for the reader, so thank you.

Great story

I absolutely prefer it if there is only slight Yuffie x Vincent. I simply can't tink of them in a real realtionsip xD

Keep up the good work )

Piercing imagery. I like this.

I read it again. I love this story. Thank you, thank you, for writing something that is not entirely meaningless. I just realised that I actually empathise with the characters. I have enough trouble with empathy in real life, never mind in stories. It's practically unheard of.

I already said this, but well done. Please write more stories.

Jeez, i cannot believe i posted three comments on this story. With me, you're usually lucky if you get one.

What is happening?

Hey you beginning with a J who wrote the nasty reviews full of yuffietine and die shelke die and all of that, i don't like ur attitude you shouldnt wish for people to die no matter how much you hate them. i mean, i dont like swearbox (cid) that much but i would never wish death on him.

You, in the words of yuffie kisaragi, are a 'meanie face'

you in the words of me, Kate, penname shelke414, need to get a heart. you're forgetting vincent's feelings on the matter. please do consider!

I sort of cried. not properly, but i had tears in the corners of my eyes, and for me, that is something of a rarity. Very very well done, this is a heartfelt and moving story and i would love to read more from you. i'm gonna print this off, it tugged at my emotions so much. Seriously a beautiful and well written story.

I also liked the way in which you portrayed Vincent's confusion between Shelke and Lucrecia (my 2 favey characters as well as aeris!), and Yuffie's inner conflict between sympathy and resentment. The best thing was all the emotions, they just seemed so real, and brilliant attention to detail. For once, i have nothing bad to say about a fanfic - AND i have written a review that's longer than 4 lines! what is happening to me?

I absolutely adore your writing. I can see why this fic won an award. And I'm putting you on alerts so I can find out the minute you post something else!

BTW, I think there is a mistake in Chp 2...I think you mean smooth planes (as in surfaces) and not plains (as in fields). Am I right?

I just want to know if you plan on continuing with this story because I absolutely love it and I really wanna know if they end up together or not. Plase continue!

Hmmh, I have to admit I liked the one-chapter version better. Of course, it's because I expected a similar effect from the next two chapter as I did from the first one. But it's not the same with three chapters which form a totality, of course... Not that there were anything wrong with the two chapters or the story as whole, but I would've been content with the first chapter.

Regardless, as I've said before, this fiction gave me valuable insight on the Yuffie/Vincent/Shelke relationship. Now I think I'll have to go read some more to broaden that view more...

I'll stay tuned for your next fiction.

What, another chapter? And third?

... I think my brain must've been sleeping when I posted that first review. I'll take a look at these tomorrow and see if I can come up with anyt sort of creative feedback.

The content of my review for the first chapter still stands, though.

Very interesting. Bittersweet. I don't read much post-DoC fics, but knowing your skill, I just had to take a look. A good thing I did, for this gives me some kind of insight at the puzzling relationship between the three of them.

In any case, very well written as usual. I'm used to reading - and writing - fictions written thoroughly in past tense save for the conversations, and it was confusing for the few first lines I read before I managed to get used it. It was a valuable lesson: One doesn't always have to use the past tense to write good fictions.

I've understood that you're quite busy, and therefore don't make any demands for writing more or updating the works you currently have unfinished - it's more than enough of you to update Growth several times a week already. Superb work on that piece of art, by the way. Hopefully you'll get some time to breath a little more freely in the near future.

Best Regards,

Haggath

P.S. I'll have to give you some feedback on your latest chapter of Memento Vivere... Or more like the last four of them. I've been slacking on that, sorry.

the moment i saw you post another ffvii story i did a little dance of ecstasy. and i haven't even played DoC! good job you did here, though. almost felt like i knew shelke. long live yuffie (and whoever she gets paired up with, as long as it's you who's writing it, hehehe).

Haha, I was reading the reviews and I found them incredibly silly.

I would have mourned Shelke's death as well, and I don't really like her very much. Yuffie shows childness and maturity in her actions that I enjoyed!

And yes, just that simple nickname can alieviate stress. Go Vince! -jumps-

Poor Shelke... so Yuffie was looking for a way to keep Shelke alive? Pobrecita. D: I feel bad for Vincent. I mean, one moment you're talking to someone and the next... You're not...

I love your stories! So emotional and melancholy! Yum!

Great job! Keep writing! Can't wait for any other of your stories!

Adios!

WOO Shelke died!...Oh, I mean Shelke died I'm so...sad?*does a small happy dance*

Now with Shelke out of the picture Yuffie and Vince can hook up!

That whole thing with Yuffie crying for Shelke even though she didn't like her, that was my favorite thing in this whole fic. I mean even though I HATE Shelke it showed the true Yuffie, ya know? Feeling for others when they can't feel.

Another chapter after all, huh? :) Kind of depressing like rest of them but i really like your style. Great story.