That was, by far, the most captivating one-shot that I've read in quite some time...

I love it.

It's so detail and also made me cry a little.

Touching

I love this story...

Very nice and sad!

Really good fic! I loved it.

SO Sad! -sniff- It was so good! I can't wait to read another one of your stories. Poor Sakura. If you ever make a sequel to this by chance, have Shinkutsuki(did I spell it right?) be around 13 and Sakura still in Akatsuki. She and the others are still trying to find a way to bring Sasori back to life also. Well, Ja'ne.

Wow...

That's deep...

Shinkutsuki is a perfect name for Sasori's son

I hope that he looks like his father!

nice

I love Sasori stories.

The Final Dance of the puppets sounds, not only like a deadly move, but a cool move to see (in the safety of some sort of protective barrier as not to be mistaken for the enemy). Hai, if only Konoha had not been so quick to judge love. Maybe in another life Sasori and Sakura could have lived in the Land of Wind as a family.

Awesome story! It's so sad!*crys*

god... that was so awesome.

I'm so excited for the sequel!

Lovely fanfiction you have there.

It was well-written and detailed. For the first time, I don't see any grammatical mistakes and that it was to the point. Angsty, yes, but I thought the fanfiction was beautiful.

Poetic.

I also thought that it was rather suspenseful, and not only did it make me excited with each following paragraph. It also seems realistic, and Sasori did not stand out too much at all - same goes for Sakura.

awesome fic! One of the best sasosaku fics out there. love how you described sasori and sakura together! sasori's my fav character in naruto!