That was creepy.. but good.. i liked the idea that Cloud was really posessive... hmm.. good job!

wow...thats so creepy and disturbing...and yet...I love it...is that strange? It's very dark but lovely

That was a good fic, I mean I am not a anti-tifa, because she is my favorite character, that was just good, there is nothing else i can...so I will end this.

0_0; I'm scared Teef! lol uhh anyway, that was wonderfully dark. Reading this in the dark and while listening to a darkish song is kinda cool. You should try it._ And yeah Tifa could have defended herslef a bit I guess, but I think if Cloud was that insand it would be quite hard. Man, Cloud scares me now._; Bye!

Daze

Thanks for all the sweet reviews everybody. I know Tifa could have defended herself. But then the outcome... really odd. Thanks again everybody _

That should be classfied as Horrer! I loved it! Except where Cloud kills Tifa, since Cloud Tifa are meamnt to be, think,stupid, think! J/K

a darker cloti than i've ever read... but very good. i won't say satisfying, as i think tifa's a dear and all, but like i said, original. you don't usually see cloud obsessed with anyone but aeris or sephiroth.

wow! cool ending! :D :D :D :D :D (but just so you know i'm not anti-tifa _)

Well, all I have to say is... O_O Very well written, though I don't think Cloud would do something like that. You should have made Tifa wake up from a dream suddenly at the end or something. Well whatever the author likes!Original, though! I commend you. -Kinneas

Much like someone else has already mentioned, I think Tifa could have protected herself against Cloud (that weak little bastard... oh, hi! ; I'll get some flames for THAT comment...) But, for the sake of the story, that was not the case. EXTREMELY good fanfic. I know someone who was obsessed with my best friend... he "stalked" her for a while, too... this fic made me remember that. Once again, VERY good!

That was so creepy! And shocking! When he... and he... I can't explain, I guess I'm still scared. 0_O You are a good writer.

Oh gosh that was creepy... Don't listen to sad music while reading this, I learned that the hard way. That was seriously...creepy. Ahhh! I can't even write a good review now!

Dark, like you said. Not bad, but I think it's very OOC. It's welldone, though.

Wow... that was amazing. Very dark and descriptive. I absolutely LOVED this. *loves angsty fics* Anyways, keep up the wonderful work. D!nok

Geez this is a really nice story... and it even creeped me out a bit. But why was Cloud doing that? Oh well it was a good story and you had a great plot and you are a great writer. Keep up the good work.