Great story! I love the stories with little lines from a song inbetween!

Hello. I think I've just fallen in love with your Ryan. Yes, I believe I have. Dark!Ryan is my favorite kind, and only if it's IC, which you've done brilliantly.

aw! i heart troypay! but you write it so well! can you check out my story: Love Me Becasue I Am Me? and update your HEARTBREAKERS STORY!! haha

luffly

~tpx33

This is officially the best HSM fic I have read so far. You are a fantastic author! Thanks for a great story!

...Fantastic!

awesome

This is amazing.

Amazing. You really had all the characters down; I appreciated how you kept them in-character but made this story deep enough to appeal to us older fans. You pulled off second person!! And I'll check out your other fics!

Great ! Very cute story, Ryella power

I liked this. It was fresh, very imaginative, very well thought out.

OMG, I just realized that I never
reviewed this. =O
That is so crazy, I could've sworn I did...
But anyway, this is so amazing, it really is.
It's pretty hard to find good Ryella fics,
but this is definitely one of them.
Second person is hard to pull off as well,
but you did it excellently.
It's descriptive, and WOW, it's very long,
and it deserves a lot of praise and applause. :]
I felt so bad for Ryan in certain parts of the
story... but at least he got a happy ending. ;]
The song really complimented the story, too.
You're a great writer; I'm so impressed at how
well written this is.
I hope you write more Ryella fics and update
"When Dreams Defer" soon!
Talk to you son! =]]

WOW Absalutly fantastic! Definantly going on to my favorites :D

i was pretty amazed by how good this story turned out to be. it could just be because i love Ryan Evans, but you did SUCH A GOOD JOB. kudos!! :) i couldnt stop reading it

Wow. This is possibly the best one shot I've ever read. I love the second-person technique you used and your style is amazing. I hope you write a full-length Ryella story because this is pretty fabulous.

This is an AMAZINGLY written story! It's definitely one of the best written fanfics I've ever seen. You're writing style is so unique and refreshing to read. I am completely serious- this is some amazing writing. You're so talented! It's not just the "you" style I'm talking about as being unique, but it's just all the descriptive sentences you use that are so artistic and interesting to read. This must have taken a long time to write, because I can tell how much effort you put into making it all it can be. It can't get any better than this!