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LostSista
2007-09-07 . chapter 16
Yay, I'm caught up with this story now. Last I reviewed was in chapter 5, sorry. I don't blame Jack for feeling just a little jealous of Sawyer...he should. Maybe it's time for Jack to stop taking Kate for granted and pay a little more attention to her. But, on the other hand, there wouldn't be that angst and tension, and we like our angst and tension. (lol) Yes, let her be vulnerable so she can fall into the arms of Sawyer who will comfort her. (lol) Update soon. :-)
bonboni
2007-08-31 . chapter 16
poor kate! now we see that jate are having quite big problems... is that where skate comes in, i wonder? i sure hope so. :D
update soon, please!
bonboni
~X~
Mathildou
2007-08-31 . chapter 16
Jack's really a bastard!

"“Are you alright love?” She heard someone ask, but she couldn’t answer them, she just ran past them and continued to the only place she knew to go…"

There at least she will find someone who really cares for her ;)

I can't wait to read about it! Update!
xKatieBearx
2007-08-31 . chapter 16
Ooh :( poor Kate. Yaay! Sawyer-ness :D I don't want him to be the rebound guy, but Skate is so perfect :P
xox Katie
LilyHeartsMarauders
2007-08-30 . chapter 16
Poor Kate. That is why it is not Jate, hahaha. Great chapter, getting good!! :o)
light-stick
2007-08-30 . chapter 16
I just read the whole thing and I'm impressed! It's really good.
Please make the next chapter longer!

Ida:-)
Lyly Ford
2007-08-30 . chapter 16
aw i waited for your new chapter !
very great ! poor sweetie, i would like to say you update quickly please but i understand that you're not very much time. good courage
kiss
lyly
SassyLostie
2007-08-30 . chapter 16
Kudos for trying out American money in fics! hehe For future reference, we usually call our money 'bills', not 'notes' but it's not a big deal. Also, taxi drivers charge per mile, so it could be $13 if it wasn't far, not that I have tons of experience with taxis, but I think it may be a bit more expensive. Anyway...It doesn't matter. ;)

"A man and a woman passed by her to enter the restaurant, they didn’t seem to notice her, they were too wrapped up in each other to care and seemed very much in love. That used to be me and Jack, she thought with a sigh." - Aww, how sad for Kate. She must feel awful how her marriage is slowly falling apart.

Sad chap, but I hope that there are more Skate moments soon! YAY! *happy dance* Maybe Jack could get in a car crash on the way home! ok, ok, I know...I'm mean. But it's been 16 chapters, and aside from a crush on Kate's part, and some tender moments, nothing is happening! lol Not that I'm complaining of course. I love your story! :)

Update soon!
kt2785
2007-08-30 . chapter 16
Yay...I was so psyched when I saw that you had updated. Jack's a 'Jackass' haha. Anyway I really like how you wrote this and it's very in character. Can't wait for some Skateness!
Beyondthunder
2007-08-30 . chapter 16
Hey you! I confess I had stopped to read this fic, and suddenly when i got the update alert i thought "c'mon, read it again" (right i do talk to myself^^) anyway i had dropped it cause i thought things were happening too slowly, but now i've read it again i think it's a very good fic!
xCharlie-Groupiex
2007-08-18 . chapter 15
That was funny. I bet Jack trusts him now, lol. please update soon i really need more! i am addicted to this story.
LilyHeartsMarauders
2007-08-16 . chapter 15
Great Story
bonboni
2007-08-15 . chapter 15
hehe! that was very convenient! XD
“Well you might not be sleeping beauty over there Freckles but some of us do sleep at half seven in a damn morning” Sawyer smirked down the phone, his tone changed know he knew it was Kate on the other end of the phone “Some of us need our beauty sleep even if you don’t”
“Sorry” Kate blushed on the other end of the phone, glad he couldn’t see the pink rising in her cheeks now from his compliment. - hehe! that was an excellent skate moment!
you're doing very well with this, emily. keep going! i like the balance you are keeping between jate and skate (which will shortly turn to skate, right) please update soon! :)
bonboni
~X~
XxSophiexX
2007-08-15 . chapter 15
Good chapter, liking all the Jack/Kate/Sawyer tension you got going. Please update soon!!

Hell yeah I loved Deathly Hallows, and I did not cry...honest *cough*
SassyLostie
2007-08-12 . chapter 15
Great chap! I can't wit for more. The story is moving a bit slow, it just seems to be random meetings, btu nothing is happening...but it's still awesome, and the writing is great! I am really enjoying this, and can't wait for more Skate!

Update soon!
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