I really liked that. I enjoyed your portrayals of all the characters, and the fact that James wasn't some dweeb that Lily secretly hated, and her love for both of the boys.
It was good, and didn't have any particularly cringe-worthy moments.
Lovely :)

really great and i could actually see something like that happening. in true gryffindor style, he was brave enough to let her go.

Loved it! Amazing! I just think in the end she should have said she´s happy with james nevertheless she still misses sirius sometimes. But it is greatly done.

I haven't read much Sirius/Lily but I'm glad I read this. It was so heartbreaking and beautiful.

Beautiful, the letter made me cry. Really awesome!

Absolutely brilliant!

wow i had never really thought to read a Lily/Sirius fic but i sort of stumbled upon this and am very glad i did!! it was really beautifully written and i loved the Sirius in this- he was really loving and compassionate, different from the usual player/scoundrel type you usually get. So all in all i really loved it!

hey! I know I should have read this sooner, I'm sorry! I know I also told youmy opinion over the phone, but hey I wanted to stop by and drop by a review! I really liked this story. I've never given the paring much thought and I can't say that I love it, but the way you wrote the two personalities and how well they fit together just seemed right... I really love your writing style and I look forward to reading more from you!Shaelyn

Wow. That was amazing. I love S/L, and that was definitely the best story I've read so far. I loved it!

Beautiful.

hello i know you havn't heard from me in a while. the story was great by the way! It really grabbed my heart i loved it!

It's a very good story. Well written, sweet, tender, and quite sad. But, I did notice several errors...

The sentence "Feigning interest in a woman as beautiful as Rosmerta was a struggle." doesn't quite make sense, perhaps you meant 'even as beautiful'? That would make sense... And in the passage "If he could he’d be just like her. But he can’t resist the urge to cause more trouble than it’s worth, except it was always worth it if Lily noticed." You switch from couldn't to can't. It should be couldn't all the way.

Oh, "and Sirius will forever regret the day in their second year when he ask James, “Have you ever noticed how green Evan’s eyes are?” after they passed her in the hallway" It should be asked James. Also, before this you said years passed by- years couldn't have passed by if Sirius said something in second year. And in the sentence "the way you smell when sweat falls from body as we move together." It should be when sweat falls from your body.

Other than that, it was fabulous. Great job!

I always have been a fan of Sirius/Lily fics, and yours is no exception. This was beautifully written, I absolutely love it. You wrote it extremely well. Great work!