HEY, I REALLY LOVE IT.
it's so perfect

This is beautiful, I love it.

i repeat
one word:

:)
...or not
kuddos!

Wow. I actually enjoyed it. Nice work.

This is the best KyouHaru Lemon-Ness that I've read. The others were so OOC or vulgar.
Why your fanfic is nice and well written? Because you depicted a realistic situation. It's easy to imagine Kyouya arriving from a business trip and making love with Haruhi.
Also, the way you described their controlling and controlled lovemaking is really in character.
Kudos to you
*Sorry if I made any english mistakes. It's not my mother tongue*

i love how you made this. it leaves much to the imagination, but not too much to stray from the story. working backwards is very original. great work.

I like! ;) Can you please make more Kyouya/Haruhi fanfics? :D

good, cute, sexy...

Holy shit! Well done! Incredibly well done! You pulled off this method of story telling very very very well. I loved it. XD

This was great, there is not enough Kyouya/Haruhi lemon-ness in the world, but you are certainly helping :P

Very nice, very different. Me likey!

I love the characterization here, especially Haruhi's thoughts and the power-play. The way she adjusts (indomitably, as always) and the way you illustrate it.

Oh, oh, oh. This was immensely enjoyable; I think you got Kyouya and Haruhi down so well, from their conversation to their "controlled and controlling" lovemaking. I like that the story 'begins' with him watching her. I like that she finds the feeling of control in something as everday as curtains and more poignantly that it is something she truly cannot control. Thank you for writing such a beautiful fic about these two.

-claps- Bravo, I'm adding this.

Absolutely brilliant.

5/5

This story is gorgeous. I have re-read it 3 times now, and I simply love your use of language. I tried looking on livejournal for your work, but I can't find it. Is there any way you'd give me the link? I would love to read more of your work.