Wow, that was dark and brillant! I'm so impressed by your writing!

That was really really good, u highlighted how Ron craves fame and glory and how he was neglected which it quite true coz it is said that he lives in the shadow of his brothers even in the book. Keep up the gd work and write more great fics )

Nice! *smirks* Great potential, wonderfully dark...

I stand in awe you ARE a GREAT writer! words cant express how good that piece was!

Oh wow... you know, as unbelievable as this is going to sound, I never pinned Ron as the one to go dark. I actually thought once that Neville, upon seeking revenge for his parents, might go, but never Ron... it does make sense though, doesn't it? He probably won't go dark, but something less than that could happen... like attacking Harry in his sleep maybe? Lol, i wanna see some blood! (Vampire part of me speaking now, i swear)

anyway, i luv this fic! keep writing

You were right! I recognized who it was before the second paragraph. However, I had my suspiscions already when I read the summary. I always thought that of all the 'goodie goodies' Ron was the one with the potential to be... Deeper. Darker. Well done for a very well written dark Ron angst fic. You captured the bulk of the reasons why I also think Ron might go dark. All these little things no one notices, like Moody's comments... very good. Strangely enough, not many people think Ron will go dark. However, I disagree with you that Ron will go mental by the end of the seventh book. JK Rowling is unlikely to pick up with the dark undertones. You really wrote this well. Congrats. I'm off to read the sequel...

Damn good story, U should write another fic where Ron actually does the evil shxt he says he would do

Wow. I always liked Ron. I have this...mental disease type thing, I made the name up. It's called F.C.A.S. Favorite Character Abuse Syndrom. I just love those characters who are hurt but don't show it, and...all those deep, deep people. Kinda relates to me. Anyway, I LOVE stories like these, 'specially with Ron. Cause Ron...well, Like you said in the story :). Great Story. Write more!

Thanks for adding Starlight to your favs! Anyway, this was written very well, and I like the style, but I find it very out of charachter for Ron.

Whoa. Now that's a confession! Initially, I imagined him just sitting on a shrink's couch (Dr. O'Brian is here to see you! _) pouring his heart out. Then the imagie changed to him in a dark room with a single candle, sitting down and scribbling frantic things in a piece of parchment with a big red quill... and there's a dagger or something next to his hand on the table. A very nice mood piece, I tell ya _. Ron Weasley. Ronald Weasley. What a defining end. -D.M.P.

no no no, you've got Ron all wrong! but it was beautifully written and very original, i've never seen a Ron POV angst fic like this.

THis is powerful!

That was... interesting. I've never thought about Ron turning evil. But then again- Peter Pettigrew was one of the Marauders and he still ended up working for Dear Voldie :)

Gosh. Do you really think Ron would go that far? Interesting concept.

WOW! That was deep! And good! As I told you some time ago, you can write anything if you only try. And it seems I was right. It is as good as everything I've read from you before, even one of the best fics you ever wrote.