Good but you stopped. Why? well don't really care i guess. If you ever make more (probably not I'm not stupid) But if you do I'll be watching.

This sounds like it has a good story line! Please continue!

You'd better continue! *shakes fist* Fresh, new idea! I love it, excited to see more soon~ :3

Reminded me a whole lot of Supernaturalist, especially Russel.
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That's a good thing because I really liked the style of writing you're using. It seems very fresh to me somehow.
Update soon!

o, i like you style of writing and i saw the pics you posted on deviantart, theyve definently cought my eye and im curious to find out what happens! keep it going!

Yes more please, it's intrigueing, don't know a thing about Xenosaga though