please update!
love everything you've written so far!
update soon!!

Oh, I just love this :) Everything was just so IC and lovely! I can't wait until the next chapter!

I liked the chapter and the story.

This story is piece of art! I love it :D

Ugh, I wish I couldve read and this when it was being written, I would have reviewed everytime then! :D this was effing amazing.

I love absolutely everything in this! Especially how Magneto came back in the end, the relationships between Rouge and her old friends, How Nate is just like John, and just, wow it was epic :]

Hello,

Just wanted to say that I love your story so far, cant wait for more.

OMG I LOVE THIS STORY! Great Job :)

You and your friend so need to right more of this. It's such a good story, and it's got me hooked. Heck I've been up all night reading this, that's how good it is. You and your friend need to keep writing. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Hey. Cool story I love it. Sorry for not reviewing but I was anxious to see what happens. Pls update soon.

Willow95

I am so far gone in love with this story! Seriously! It's incredibly well written. Realistic, the characters are well portrayed, the feelings are natural and fit them so well. I can't wait for the next update. I was wondering when the Brotherhood would find them and as soon as I read Magneto was there, I sat up straighter in my seat and came to attention. This has a wonderful plot line and incredible writing. I really can't wait for more! Update soon!

I love this story, i reealy hope you update soon.

Aww this chapter was really sweet. For only writing in English for a year this was better than great. You did a really good job on this and you write really well. Can't wait to see where you guys take this story!

Wow!

Awesome Story!

I really like how are you developing the story, so real and very close to what a mutant must go through. Also liked how are you developing John and Rogue relationship. And Nate, he's so adorable! Keep up with the great work.

cool update soon.

You said you've only wrote in English for about a year, I must say your really good. Most people who use it their whole lives don't write near was good as this.

I'm loving this story so much. I love how John is still his old self yet he's got a soft side now.