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| YFWE 2008-07-29 ch 7,  | abuseThis is a rather good story, I must say. I believe I missed it when it had been updated earlier... although let me assure you, I'm caught up now. So Rose is certainly a bit, er, not herself... I mean, the way she reacted when Alex came in the room was simply frightening! All this because of a dragon... :P For some reason, reverting the name of the White House to the HuntsHouse really made me laugh. Of course, I'm amused very easily. Good cliffhanger too... sets up the next chapter quite nicely. Can't wait for it! Yours in fiction, YFWE |
| Luiz4200 2008-07-23 ch 7, | abusePlease update. I hope Rose remembers. Since she's in Australia, will she go to Fred Nerk's house? |
| dwyland101 2007-08-04 ch 6, | abuseUpdate! Update! Update! I love how it's coming along and good cliffie! |
| Luiz4200 2007-07-10 ch 6, | abuseDon't keep the suspense for so long. What did he see? Post another chapter, please. |
| technogrl15 2007-06-21 ch 6, | abusewow... good! chapters 5+6 im a bit confused though, who's alex? What happened! hurry! update TODAY! keep up the good work! |
| dwyland101 2007-06-17 ch 4, | abusePlease Update soon! I am waiting and I like this so far. |
| technogrl15 2007-05-31 ch 4, | abusehey, i like it! its good. i wonder what happens next... keep up the good work! |
| JusticeIsBlind13 2007-05-04 ch 4, | abuseTHa was a great chapter! I can't wait for the next one. |
| Hotspur 2007-03-19 ch 2, | abuseReally nice job, I love where you are going! I think you should bring in Spud and Trixie though, they might be able to provide resistance. |
| Hotspur 2007-03-19 ch 1, | abuseIgnore the idiot flamers, your story is well written and original. I hope you continue, I think it's incredible. And if I might make a suggestion, sands of time exists...use it if you wish! |
| Queen of Spar Oom 2007-03-17 ch 1, | abuseYeah! Mr. Pasternak 65 is right! don't listen to them!(Especially the bad language!) I thought this story is cool. it shows what would've happened if the huntsclan had won! please keep writing, no matter what other people say! Keep doing the unexpected! I liked this story! Plus, i predict that somehow, the magical creatures will make some kind of comeback. Jake did say huntsgirl would pay. Please update and ignore those mean reviews! |
| Mr. Pasternak 65 2007-03-06 ch 1, | abuseInteresting Twist. Very well written. One last thing: I've noticed you've been recieving very hurtful flames today. Well, here's my advice, don't listen to them. You're better than they are and you know it. Keep up the good work! |
| Wolfwhisperer 2007-03-05 ch 1, | abuseis this some sick joke? what about jakes mom and dad? the would be suspicious if his kids mysteriously died, with no bodys left. |