SWEET! TOMO GOT IN! please continue.

That was great!

Yah those two are probably in love, though I'll deny it anyway. But thinking twice about it the constant fighting and insulting names seem to be a desperate cry for sex.

But why did chiyo get rid of her double pigtails!?! Nay I say, NAY! That does mean "no" right?

I don't usually read many TomoxYomi stories (I'm too much of a SakakixYomi fan) but I'm glad I read this. Totally funny, Osaka's little strory cut was fab. But one thing made this fic awesome...Lupin! Just...great.

aw i love this fic!! so much Tomo/Yomi fluff XD i really hope you continiue it. ^__^

hahaha this is awsome good job

Yeah, I like that. I love Tomo and Yomi, and the other pairings fit.

It might be good for you to continue this, take a change from writing one-shots and write a multi-chaptered story.

For it to be successful I would think you'd have to tone it down a little, but the crazyness was fun for this chapter.

I think it would be a shame to not continue this after setting-up a decent future setting. However, it's up to you.

Best of luck.