"You love as you hate, hot and dangerous ... " that, along with the "stunted gifts" notion, really resonated. Conflicted, loose cannon Anakin's dragon is truly scary.

Fascinating. You've got some nice subtlety here.

I don't like the (possible) implications of slash, but this short fic is written pretty well. The grammar is almost perfect, which is rare. The characerizations, though implied, thus leave a lot to the reader and take on good dimension. Very interesting how you switched up Mr. Stover's tactics and spoke as the "dragon" to Anakin. (*hugs Mr. Stover*) Anyway, nice job.

Hm. I like it.