Aw, that whole Mickey and Minnie scene was so cute!

Wow... I really like this story, it's detailed and funny! LOL! But man, your chapters are really freaking long!

I love Ace Combat 5

Thunderhead...Ace combat 5! did you get the name from that?

So...you got rid of the Xemnas fight? Damn. I was looking for that battle for awhile. Now that its gone...well...

Come on, your story is becoming a little to ridiculous for my tastes. Guardians training Kairi? Monsters, or Flans, fighting Sora, when I doubt that world even has monsters. Sora, son of who and who? Your making everything so weird to read. Make it simple. Not some complex reading material. It's hard for me to enjoy anything when you bring in all this new stuff that I don't give a crap about.

Also, aren't you rushing the whole romance thing a bit. I mean, the way you made the story before was alright...now, it just isn't. I find myself confused more often then enjoying this story.

(Sigh) I'll read on, but I'm not to sure if the changes you make have either improved the story...or ruined it.

And if your thinking to yourself, "well, the other thousand reviews from people saying they like my story, says I'm a good writer"... people don't like writing the truth or saying bad things about stories. I'm sorry, but this my own oppinion, considering how this story looks now, I'm guessing that you changed it enough that this is probably no hope for me enjoying the once good story that you wrote.

this is great...sry 4 the short review, but reviewing on the 1st chapter doesn't bring to much to say.

That was really great Shire Folk! I loved the part about being in Riku's mind also when 'Ansem' was like Sora is going to kill Kairi! You put every thing in great detail! I like the Sora bashing! ;)! If you are writing any new stuff you shoukd let me n-know please! A-thank you!

Aw it wasn't Spyro. Oh well! Shire Folk you made Nixion so powerful! Is he even more powerful than Maleficint? (I hate spelling mistakes why can't I spell at times like Maleficint I'm not soo sure I spelled her name right. I'm proof that God has a sense of humor!) You are really mean to Kairi these past chapters! Getting hit by Maleficint , Sora might not be her husband yada yada thing! Also getting hit by an arow? But hey there always has to be a difficult time foe the heros right? So I congratulate you for making an awesome story I can't wait to read the other two! : )!

Shire Folk whats up with the wind?
Where did you get that idea from? Where you lying about Sora and Kairi's wedding and daughter? OMG if you are this is just as bad as killing their parents! But Sora could be the knight of valor right? I mean he could re-born somehow. You know in those really cheesy movies how they tell the hero you must be re-born! So is the charm Spyro you gotta answer PLEASE! That is all. I also dropped my minions. I was probably the must annoying person you've ever met er read reviews from! But I mean hey one less idiot on fanfiction makes the world a better place to live! Except for those people who like Sora and Riku! Sickos! But you know don't fangirl write those? I mean your part with Sora and Roxas was really funny and not all weird because they didn't do that. I wonder what Kairi would have done? I'm just rambling on so I'll end this right here. Goodbye Shire Folk! Do not get writers block!

this chpater was just...W-O-W. i can't really think of just what to say, but i do have a ton of wuestions like, does sora's hair look like rikus from the first game only brown? when does sora lose his arm?
WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN! (you and your stupid cliff-hangers)
but you got me hook now, shire. THANKS FOR ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER!
~Nobosy-XV

Alright Shire Folk poor Sora and Kairi! I'm just itching to read about Sora and Kairi's wedding and Daughter but can't Sora and Kairi have a son?
Sandian:Sora and Kairi will have whatever Shire Folk wants them to have! Now be quiet!
Never!*pulls sword out of nowhere* You now will die
Sandian: Don't people get to know what breed and color I am first?
Fine Sandian is a white Gernan Shepard
Sandian: A thank you!
Now you die! Great story Shire Folk I got me a German to kill (by german I meant Sandian the German Shepard) I meant no disrespect to the Germans but you have to admit the Nazis screwed Germany up! Hey Sora shoukd be in a story of WWII!

OMG is the summon charm Spyro!? I love that purple Dragon! Wait is it Spyro?
Sandian:You'll just have to read to find out!
But but
Karen: Come on Deathfang17 be a good girl and R&R!
Gregory: What does that mean?
I think it means Read&Review! Shire Folk decent! I love Simba's daughter! Have you ever notice that they look the same kinda of! So does Kovu! (I thinks thats how you spell it?) So anyways I LOVE your work! Adios amigos!
Beware!

Hahaha! Sora and Kairi got punk'd! I wish I could kill more people!
Sandian: You wish you could but no! Besides you haven't introduced us yet!
Gregory and Karen: YEAH!
Fine Sandian Mark Hollows, Gregory Alexander Alkain and Karen Jennifer Volaski are three extremely annoying animals in my mind! Only me and Gregory have something in common. We both like killing!
Gregory:So True
Karen: Shire Folk you are an extremely talented writer so later on I expect a book from you! I don't care what it is about just write it!
I also forgot to say that they share some of my personailty! -_-!
Sandian: Really we do?
Yes Sandian did ya know that your more of a girl than Karen?
Gregory: Does that mean Sandian is gay?
Yes.
Sandian: Just get to the piont of the Review Shire Folk is probably thinkin how dumb you are!
Humph fine. Really great chapter! I love this story! Like Karen said Ditto! Goodbye!

Yo wat up Shire Folk! Great love fest!
Woot woot! Anyways I have to go look up most of those songs. I'm just really glad that you didn't have Roxas sing Why Don't You Kiss Her! That would just be wierd! To me anyways! Probably not to most people but that's just me voicing my opinion! So take that society! You can just k- Sandian: going to far remember what that nice lady said take deep breaths!
Shut up Sandian I didn't ask you to come her!
Sandian: Hey I'm just an imagination in your head just like Karen Volaski and Gregory Alkain!
Yeah but your the anoying one of the bunch!
Sandian: Can't you just be thankful that you have two imaginery dogs and one imaginery half-breed?
Not when one of them dosen't know when to shut up!
Sandian: Ouch! Well Deathfang17 needs to go to anger managent now! Bye!

Awesome I just love C-4! I use it alot! Not really anyways... I forgot! OMG how could I forget what I was going to say! Oh wait now I 'member! Sora and Kairi I just love them! Also the Yo-Ho song that Sora starts! But if Mac was a fishermen how did he know the song? Unless he just taught it to Sora! I always thought of Sora and his dad complete opposites! Which I would have put in my story (which had to be discontinued!*place angry comment here*). I was going to put Sora's dad as a Keyblade master assain! When they first meet after like 12 years they arre at each others throats! But when he figures out who Sora is he ya know tries to kill him! But that's just my mind and the way it is! If your wondering yes I've been to the people who talk to you on those extremely comfy couches! Well I got to go kill a guy/woman thing adious Amigo! May waffles guide you! Still lookin for logo -_-! Not doin so well!