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niwa-k
2009-11-06 . chapter 11
Yay Skyvra the crazy is back!!

thank you please contnue soon
niwa-k
2009-10-21 . chapter 10
wow I love this idea, and I like that you made dagger into a bitch, sorry but sometime she's simply so annoying innocent and angsty in the game so this was refreshing thank you very much^^

I also really like Skyvra and Kuja^^

hopefully see you soon
Shurin
2009-06-30 . chapter 10
Please update soon. It's been a long time since I read a story that have a partly insane character such as this. I love Skyvra lol 8D
Unlucky-angel13
2008-10-26 . chapter 9
I'm really liking this story please update soon!
GlassWings163
2008-10-13 . chapter 8
I love the story so far. I can see Zidane being like that if he were a prince. Nice job. ^-^
Dust-Raccoon
2008-09-26 . chapter 8
Nice story. Keep up the update because yes, people still seem to be reading.
Fr3ya
2008-06-27 . chapter 8
nice story you got going here, not much kuja/zidane happening yet though.. I guess you will put that in later chapters right?
(^_^) Your Oc is cool though
LynnGryphon
2008-06-20 . chapter 8
I just found this fic while C2 hopping and I like it. I hope you'll continue this along. Are Skyvra and Kili actually from the game or just OCs? I know your AN said you characterized them so I'm just curious.

I like the way your tormenting Zidane and Kuja. You mentioned Kuja's tail, does Zidane have his?

Hope you continue,
-LG
yumie-darkness123
2008-06-14 . chapter 8
THIS IS WONDERFUL SO FAR!
im awaiting your next chapter :)
Satsubatsu Yue
2008-06-05 . chapter 8
Yay! You updated! ^_^ I absolutely love this story. I can't wait for the next chapter!
GlassShards
2008-06-05 . chapter 8
i am still reading...htsi si awesome loved hte last rune u had her draw nice and peaceful till teh last one..
Asaka Kiseragi
2008-03-26 . chapter 3
I like the idea of this. Garnet's sudden evil turnabout seems somewhat odd, but I like idea you've got going on here. I think a little clearer explanation about who Skyvra was with regards to Zidane would've been nice, as I had to reread a few times to work out what was going on. But I got it. It's a good premise, and I enjoyed the FFVI link there. I'm interested to see where this goes!

Mind if I guess the wandering travellers? ...I'd guess you're talking about Fayt Leingod and Albel Nox from Star Ocean Til The End of Time? Faerie Light is a spell from that game, and it works like Curaga so...yeah...o_o
Black Cat Anon ♠
2007-12-20 . chapter 6
*Pokes excessively*
Just sat down and read 1-6, thats why you're gettin your first review from me now... So Hullo there! Good story, very entertaining- can't wait for new chapters! ^^

- Got Sardine?
Firehedgehog
2007-11-22 . chapter 6
giggles
FREAKSHOW1
2007-11-22 . chapter 6
It must be an overdose of gravy, because the sardine joke made me laugh for about three solid minutes.
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