MUST UPDATE!

kyah... i so love this story of yours!

its super sweet and i can really imagine your story coming to life because their personalities fits so well!

please update soon! many looks f0rward to it!

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I luv this story!
Could Cloud be Sora's cousin(& Roxie-poo brother;P)?
When r Kairi going to tell her friends bout Sora? & how will they react?

Authors love reviews, so here's my ten cents:
I like this; at first it almost sounded like my "I Heart You" story... so i guess that's one thing that kept me interested besides the cliche (dont mean it in a bad way) of Kairi and Sora working together. I'll continue reading this :D

Very Good!! Loved it... and i cant wait for you to get the next chapter up*nudge nudge*

This is a totally awesome story so far! I was looking around randomly on DA one day, and I ran across some of your art about Tuesday Affairs (the drawings of the girls). I read through the character descriptions, and was really interested in how the story might be, so I searched for more of the art you did based on TA. Soon, I totally wanted to read your fanfic, because it sounded so good. So I looked around on some of the comments after your drawings to try to find out where there might be a link for this story, and after a while, I was finally successful! (Yes!)

So anyway, I think that you should definitely keep on going with this story; it rocks. I totally love how Kairi hates Sora, but how she also seems sort of unsure of whether to hate him or not some of the time. I love the plot already- it’s so funny! And I like all the characters, especially Sora. It was so hilarious (and cute) when he fell asleep on the train, and Kairi tried to get her bag from him. But just know that you really have a major fan (both of your writing and art)! Please update soon; I'm really looking forward to reading more! (And I really, really want to know what happens after chapter three). Great story; if I could rate this writing out of 5 stars, I'd give it 10!

Aw! This story is so cute! I love it! I honestly can't blame Kairi about the whole hotel thing... I'd be thinking that too!And Sora... even thoungh he is a player, he's still sweet! His parents... That makes me wonder! It's kind of odd that he doesn't seem to care. But I guess we'll just have to find out! I also notied it's been a long time since you updated.. Which I understand! Life can be time consuming. But it would be great if you could post another chapter!
Lots of Love,
CrystalHeart

Nice, I'm a little like Kairi in this, boys make me sick and Players are 20 times worse! Yep, I have a feeling I'll be single forever, but anyway! So cute, lol, if I were Kairi, I'd be freaking out too, I would probably run to the nearest store and buy pepper spray. And, how do you get so many chapter reviews? I have 68 but I also have 19 chapters, and I almost crapped my pants when I got 7 reviews in one chapter, eh, it's my first story and I'm getting better in every chapter so yea...umm...bye?

CAUSE THEY ARE EUROPEAN EXCHANGE STUDENTS! dats why! haha. =P
and us Europeans got to stick together...

haha they are so cute together, i squealed. literately.
but see my sister wanted me to play net tet half way through the chapter, so i never really got the full effect, but still.

ZOMG! an almost kiss, and it still made Kairi flush.
Kairi just in case your brain is too boyish, haha i get that from my friends all the time...according to them i am 95% guy and 5% girl. and my response every time is, 'and i am still more girl then you will ever be.' haha we all laugh after but...
wait...i think i had a point before i went off on this ramble...i think...
let me recap...
oh yeah, Kairi, that is Sora saying i want to kiss you. WHICH IS SO CUTE! -squeals-! :)

so anyway...the last part of the story kinda confused me...what question were they talking about at the end...see the only conclusion i could come up with was that, Sora found out that Kairi really did not like him that much in the beginning, i mean that may not be how she feels now...but it would still hurt a guy like Sora.

who Oh my fricken god, turned out way different than i thought he would be. -yes people what you are witnessing is pure internet shock- it exists, you just cant see it... =P

anyway... so yeah...
time for PREDICTIONS!
they are going to sneak in to the hotel, because gosh Sora is a fun loving guy, plus how could you not write that, it would be so fun to read...so they are going to be in the hotel room, try saying awkward ten times fast... i bet you cant do it.

anyway so yeah, then Sora is going to be like AH! the sun set, and rush them out of the hotel to watch the sun set on 'Sunset Hill'
and then he can tell Kairi about the rumor of this oh so romantic 'hill'
and she is like Sora is really different than i thought he would be...and just when they are about to kiss...his phone rings, being the wealthy business man he is...he cant afford to miss a call, so he picks it up...and Kairi she partly understands...
and then when he realizes who it is his voice drops and his pupils dilate and he responds, 'um no Namine (or other really hot girl) i cant really talk right now...blah blah blah...and he says some other things, but Kairi is too upset to listen.
She is like, 'omg what was i thinking, he is still the same player, you know what i would not be surprised if this whole night was just an act.

she proceeds to yell...and he proceeds to try and have two conversations at once...
she walks away...and he is left of the hill kiss-less.
sorry but i really love drama.
and here is the big question now.
HOW WILL THEY GET THEIR PROJECT DONE?!?!?!

haha, a not so happy ending. but i mean they will work it out. Kairi knows way to much for her to just walk out of his life. and Sora has got it too good for her to just, well forget and go back to the no-personality cyclone girls again.

but ah! so please update soon, ok. adding this to alerts and favs! bye! :)

I KNOW it was FRICKEN HUGE!
just kidding, i like long chapters. they are fun. and to top it all off they make your eyes hurt.

Dude if i was Kairi i probably would have unintentionally, seeing that i am a total klutz, poked one of my eyes out with Sora's oh so gorgeous, but deadly, spikes.
hahaha, that my friend would be a very interesting scene to read. haha.

so yeah... what to write what to write...

hm...Olette, still cute...she is like a mimi yapping pup. so cute, yet loud...see i was trying to spell chawawa...but it came out all wrong.

fyi i cant spell to save my life. good thing i live in this century cause if it was not for spell check they would probably mistake me for a European transfer student and put me in the special ed reading class...

anyway that was mean sorry. i love the special end, the make the world happy...

anyway...so yeah Kairi girl YOU OVER REACTED! his family probably just owns the hotel or something...like his grandfather...old money you know.
and i bet his cousin is ROXAS! oh man i sure hope it is.
-sorry but i just cant go a review without mentioning his name, ROXAS! i love it. -yum yum it em up!- =P

so anyway, this was a good chapter, nice and long. yeah now i finally have a reason to get colored contacts. just kidding, i am sure they are fine...after many doses of drugs and such, just kidding again.
Roxas...if you put him in the story of course, should be total BA! ahh. i love my smexy Roxas...sorry but unfortunately i am an overly obsessed fan girl...cant help it, its part of genetics you know...

anyway next chapter time. YEA! i love these moments. tehe. bye! :)

haha, in Kairi's last line she should have said she was FINE!
cause you know what fine stands for:
F: Frantic
I: Intense
N: Neurotic
E: Emotional

haha, anyway so yeah...this is cute. Poor Kairi though,

i have to say the roles are kinda switched...i mean it is not a bad thing, change is good...i am just used to having Namine be the tom boy and Kairi the girly girl...
maybe that is just because i normally read NamineRoxas fanficts...
i mean Sora and Kairi is cool...but i have never intentionally read some of there stuff...but hey this story might change my mind about them...after all chapter one was really fun to read! :)

so yeah...i wonder if this story is going to be slight NamineRoxas...it is always nice to have a back up pairing...for when you just get tried of writing, you can write an all out FLUFF extravaganza chapter...
they are always fun to write...but see i dont think that the whole Fluff party would happen with KairiSora...just yet -insert evil laugh here- but see that is the point of the back up couple...all the fun none of the work...

ok yeah...anyway, Olette she is such a cutie. anyway nice job!
nExT cHaPtEr TiMe! Yeah! bye. :)

OMGOSTHISISSOWONDERFUL!

XD Uh oh...but what is Riku's business? Hm...

MWAHAHA! I found you!! I don't have a dA account, so I can't comment there, but I really wanted to read this! I love it already!! Update soon? PWEEZ?!

I notice some student's names are from FFI!