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Calleigh's little girl
2008-03-02 . chapter 18
Great done! But somehow I feel embarrassed by being called "your muse" - I haven't done anything...
crazy10
2007-09-25 . chapter 18
Aww...I really liked the last paragraph.
The way you ended the story makes it seem finished, but like it can still go on. It's kind of confusing. lol.
Overall, I really liked your story.

I really hope you write another! Until next time...
crazy10
2007-09-20 . chapter 17
Nice addition. I could just picture Sam and Jack having breakfast together...so sweet! Can't wait for your next chapter!
crazy10
2007-09-19 . chapter 16
I loved the updates! I can't wait for the next one!
hotchner
2007-09-18 . chapter 15
That was an AWESOME Chapter. I couldn't believe it when Martin had
just figured out that Jack and Sam had, had an affair before he
even had worked there. I would like to know how Jack's Best
Friend that had gotten killed(the one that had gotten killed in
season 4) found out how they had an affair.
Keep up the AWESOME Writing. Can't wait to read the next Chapter.
THANK YOU!
Ellie
2007-08-08 . chapter 14
Hey there I like this story very much!I hope you will update soon!
crazy10
2007-08-07 . chapter 14
It's so short! However, I liked it.

Update soon!
hotchner
2007-08-06 . chapter 14
That was a FABULOUS Chapter. I'm glad that Farrell couldn't
find anybody who was wanting to get rid of Jack. I hope that
Victor decides to get rid of Farrell. I just saw that show
today on TNT and I'm glad that everybody got on Jack's side
and through his butt out of the office. Keep up the FANTASTIC
Writing. Can't wait to read the next Chapter.
crazy10
2007-08-06 . chapter 13
I loved the banter between Jack and Sam. Please update soon!

Btw, for some reason, I can't seem to get to Chapter 14. The site is saying that there's no text for that chapter.
helen
2007-07-21 . chapter 13
As always I enjoyed reading this chapter!! I love the way you write! It's really easy to understand even for someone who is not english or american at all (like me!!) So ... I'm waiting for the next chapter! Great job! Congratulations!
helen
2007-07-09 . chapter 12
I like the way you did this!! It's sounds real ! Great job!!
Now, wainting for the next chapter!
hotchner
2007-07-06 . chapter 12
That was a SPLENDID Chapter. I really loved the way
that Maria came in and told Jack how happy she was
that he took his family instead of Sam. That took a
lot off from Jack. I'm glad that Jack and Sam aren't
together again until Jack get's his divorce. Keep up
the Awesome Writing. Can't wait to read the next
Chapter. Thank You!
rebandmel
2007-07-06 . chapter 12
i admit i am not a sam/jack fan i am more a M/S fan, i have enjoyed this fic alot though, how the affair started, jack is silly thinking he wasn't going to be caught by someone to kiss Sam in such a public place was dumb, i feel for Sam she is hurting really badly, i think Jack could have let her down more gently, great writing look forward in reading more.
crazy10
2007-06-03 . chapter 11
Sweet chapter! Please update ASAP! :P
GEM8
2007-04-05 . chapter 10
This was a very good chapter. Sam and Jack deserve to be happy with each other. Keep up the good work. I look forward to the next chapter.
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