 KristenCathie 2008-10-15 . chapter 1LMAO! This is hilarious. :D You really captured the characters voices. My favourites parts are:
- Ronon looked disgruntled because he no longer had ‘legitimate’ reasons to hit Rodney (Hehehe)
- Rodney smiled, “What about Iratus McKaytus?” (lol! Completely ingenious)
- Rodney grinned, “We can call the bugs ‘Iratus Kavanaghtus’. It’s very fitting. I might actually end up pitying the bugs.” (LMAO! Another great one liner here)
- Teyla apologized, “We are sorry Dr. Weir. We didn’t believe that any harm would come from this name. However, Ronon and I tried to dissuade John and Rodney from telling it to the locals in fear that someone would get hurt from it. It appears that they did not heed our advice.” (I loved this because not only was it written completely in character, but I found it hilarious how Teyla was trying to get herself out of trouble by passing the blame onto the other two. lol!)
Anyway, great job! |