 ukgurl17 2007-07-19 . chapter 1im sure danny wouldn't have a problem with satisfying a woman, or flack either.
i sure as heck wouldn't mind finding out lol
damn my dirty mind hehe |
 Aemie 2007-07-16 . chapter 1that was completely awesome!! lol, i adored flack particularly i think, that was just too good! not very often you come accross so well written smut :p
well done, aemie |
 JennCorinthos 2007-06-10 . chapter 1This was great... I loved it!
JENNIFER |
 mabelreid 2007-03-25 . chapter 1Wow, i need to dump some ice water over my head. Poor Danny, i love that he was the insecure one for a change. LOL
I liked the ending so sweet. great job. |
 my-sparkles 2007-03-11 . chapter 1Can't believe I missed this one! *smacks herself*
I'm so sorry! *hides*
How could Danny not have thought what he did? Even I was driven to that direction when I read the dialogue! LOL Mind can be really tricky... ;)
And Danny's reaction is priceless!!
I can't even begin to say how I liked this! It was funny, really funny and laughable and at the same time I felt sorry for Danny. C'mon, it must have been tough for him. :D
And Danny and Flack's conversation... *bursts into laughing* I can almost picture Flack confirming, on the women he slept with, if everything was all right. Subtle checking, though... LOL
Quoting - "‘You my friend are depressing me. I don’t have any problems satisfying a woman, none at all. I’ve certainly never had any complaints……. You’ve been after Lindsay so long that you’ve lost your confidence – you just left it to long between….you know…and….and….no, absolutely I have never had a woman walk away unsatisfied.’
Flack backed rapidly out of the room, pausing briefly at the door. ‘If you think she didn’t have a good time then you’ll have to do what those chick magazines are always telling us we need to do…talk about it…ask her what she likes….ask her what you did wrong……’" - This just speaks for itself. He wants to run of there. Way too hard to think about it. ;)
Quoting - "She stared at him as if he was losing his marbles before answering him. ‘I was talking about the apartment I went to see before work this morning.’
Danny stared at her as relief flooded him…..closely followed by embarrassment that he had got it so wrong." - I could never have guessed the apartment thing. Ever! Awesome detail, Maria! *claps*
And damn, this was HOT! Loved Lindsay's actions, the way she decided to teach Danny a lesson and loved the sweetness that followed their 'uncontrolled' actions.
And did I mention HOT? ;) Well, it is! Incredible to see how sex can powerful only with teasing and provocative gestures and words.
Amazing work! :) |
 FirehouseGirl 2007-03-06 . chapter 1Whew! All right, I need to go take a cold shower now. That was fabulous writing. Keep up the good work. |
 Amina 2007-03-06 . chapter 1 *thud* that was me hitting the floor. read that as that was good, very good.. |
 Elainhe 2007-03-06 . chapter 1Oh, poor, poor, poor Danny!
This was beautifu, and funny - really nice break this afternoon.
I wondered about the titel; now I know. ;)
You really hade me curious about what she was talking about too. |
 notesofwimsey 2007-03-05 . chapter 1Well, it made me giggle (which is quite a feat at the moment), and I loved the idea of poor Danny and Flack trying to figure out how they would know if a woman faked!
I loved the ending, though! |
 The Little Corinthian 2007-03-05 . chapter 1AU for now, but give it a month- we're canon! :0P That was hot! Nice job! :0P |
 Ninde Ancalime 2007-03-05 . chapter 1Yay, smut! Lol, that got me laughing at first... then it got me all hot and bothered.. Lol. Fabulous, you have to love a Danny who is insecure and at the mercy of the voice of Paranoia. And Lindsay! She was kick ass in this story! Lol, I have to say that is one hell of a way to teach someone a very important lesson... demonstration is always so much better. |
 GinaJas 2007-03-05 . chapter 1Golly gee, I loved it! |
 wjobsessed 2007-03-05 . chapter 1Hmm. That was something!
Personally I think you should do a sequel where Danny gets his turn to have her undivided attention :) |
 oddie33325 2007-03-05 . chapter 1I LOVED IT!! SO HOT!! WILL THERE BE MORE!! |
 trustno1-1987 2007-03-05 . chapter 1Howdy :D
That was one hot little one-shot! The convo between Stella and Lindz in the beginning was so funny - I was trying to figure out what they might be talking about (didn't come up with apartments). Even funnier than that was Flack's reaction to Danny's complete insecurity (as if he could fail to satisfy as woman! hehe).
And obviously the rest of the chapter... *melts* Wow.
I love how he whispered 'I love you' to her the night before, and the whole way Linds deals with it. And the last line, which is deliciously fluffy, but in a non-sickly way :) (Terrible review, I do apologise; and I will get round to reading your multi-chap fic and commenting properly, I promise!)
But still, I loved this fic :D Nowt like a good bit o' smuff!! |