That was really good. :)

SO AWESOME! Why can't some people's fanfics be like that? .

I REALLY love that part when they were all panicking over Ash, but did it HAVE TO be Brock's POV ? Please, a story from the sidelines is MUCH better!

that ways interesting. (i cant believe i am sayinig this, really, i cant) but brock was somewhat out of character. he is crazy for girls, but he usually keeps things in perspective! hes crazy, but not THAT crazy!

"It also goes against tradition for Ash not to drown in an episode where water plays an important role." Hehe, that is very true isn't it? I can thing of hardly a single episode (or movie, for that matter) that invoves a large body of water that dosen't also involve Ash nearly drowning in it. I enjoyed this fic a lot. :)

Yet another excellent story! Good job!

cute! I love brock pov!g/j!

Very good and in character! Kinda surreal at the Brock drowning point. THe thing is even if he does settle down with someone he'll still go around looking for more! That's all, amigos.

Now I completely realize how Brock scares every girl ('cept Misty) away. This was funny though.

Heh...this is the first Brock POV I read! And I must say it's great! I wonder what Ash felt whan he started drowning (why did he drown, anyway?) and no one came to his help...I think he wanted it to be Misty! Or maybe he just didn't think of anything except: "I'm not breathing, I'm going to die!". Brock is THAT jealous? Bad Brock! His best friend almost died!

LOL poor Brocko. And poor Ash. Trying to kill him like that! Misty(MY Misty) is very angry now! lol. Cute ficcie! _ - Zero-Chan

Cool story, Dragoness! I must say I'm really impressed with this ficcie! Write more! I would love to see more, Brock p.o.v's

Wow

Yay! I loved this story! It was sooo cute! Ash and Misty fooling around in the pool is so classic! Awesome. And you're right . . . Ash does seem to drown a lot, doesn't he? LOL Keep up the good work!

That was so good! You're right about Ash having a knack for almost dying. What's up with that episode that he almost gets hit by a car and then almost drowns before the first commercial break? LOL Oh, and I loved the poetics. This was really fun to read. Thanks!