I LOVE THIS!I think it's

I LOVE it how their talking and fighting at the same time!

Your story is really unique and I really liked it. Unfortunately, I thought Daine's relationship with Numair and Darius were too inconsistent. I understand that she loved both men but her feelings were erratic and uncharacteristic, which showed more towards the ending of the story and especially when she said that she had loved only one man. Other than that, I really enjoyed your take on a different pairing!

i love your story! please don't leave me hanging!i hate when people do this to me. All together i really enjoyed your story. if this is something you really like to do, i sugest that 1)you finish this story(people like me might never forgive you if you dont(JK!)and 2)start your own story, from scratch. I konw it will be harder than when you write about other people's cahracters and setings, by by what you show here with this story with Tamora Pierce's stories will prove my point of you dont belive me.

Well have fun with what ever you do

The ending was adorable. Loved it!

NO NO NO NO NO NO NO!

I reFUSE to have Daine and Darius! Ooh, Daine, if you do something stupid, I'm going to be pissed!

Other than that, great story.

-Jillian

Update soon! This is great!

please dont end here!i really think that you should update this. it is so good#!

that was good but the ending was uncalled for.

Aw, sad ending. I'll look for another story!

gah i started to read the sequel to this one first wa but this is a realy good story.

omg i love that story so much! it's so cool, the plot is awsome, and Darius is so good its like tp made him! -

...SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! either you should continue it from here or you should make a sequel! I can't belive that you would be cruel enough to end one of the most awesome stories ever created...LIKE THIS! You get a cookie, but i took out the chocolate chips because of the lack of D/N in the ending! *gives Daine of the Wolves foresaid cookie* and with no milk! Muahahahahahaha! I can be just as cruel as you! but anyway totally rocking fic, i can't wait to read more of your stuff! Keep it up!

-Triple L _

one word...WOW!

Haha... Numair's thoughts sound like an alter ego in his head to me. Or maybe that's just his real thoughts. Either way, its funny. Because he is funny and acts like a child sometimes. In a good way. :)