sniff sniff...

this one-shot was so sad... specally since Van saw her kissing another... but it was at the same time so sweet...

more! more!

Ohh...how very angsty. But still very nicely balanced with postive emotions as well. Thanks for posting this.

oh that wuz cute! WAFF is always nice _

Aw as much as I hate Van for killing the dragon slayers and scarring dilandau-sma's face that was sweet- Rika Avalon, Lady Shinjitsu, Keeper of Secrets, Zaibach Mistress, Vicoria!

awww! I love the way you wrote this... .:sigh:... if only hitomi knew... -

Oh my gosh! I can't believe that i missed reading this story sooner! It's so great! You are such an amazing writer! you really are! You are so talented! More so than me! Anyways i hope you continue with more stories and finishing old ones! _ PLEASE! Oki Miya _

Wow! that was another one of your touching stories! it was great, again, i am speechless! i really don't know what to say except you've got real talent about capturing other's people's souls! that is just beautiful! please write more, it was great. really really great! i luved it! i wish i wouldn't be so speechless, but i m! god, that's such a great story! please please write more!

Oh gosh...*sniff* That was...BEAUTIFUL! Tee hee...you gotta love Van's sacrifice...OH GOSH! Great fanfic!

All I can say is that I like this story! _

I really liked it! Good job, you really depicted Van's personality and Hitomi's quite well. Keep writing _

I really like your rendition. Very nice and ver depressing, I really really like it! It makes me remember the feelings I had when i wrote my poems under the Cruel Fates saga. It really awoke my sad side! Very nice!

HIYA! ****GLOMP!****

_! Even with all the painkillers, this turned out very well! Poor you, haveing to listen to Mary's bad music. I insist that you write more, like this _ I wuv you!

From DUCKY!

I love his reflections, but... *ugh* this is when she kissed Allen...

Cute. The song doesn't really fit 'cus just like you said, Hitomi isn't really loving Van so Van can't love the way she loves him... did you get that at all? Okay, sorry and just ignore that, keep up the good work.